- Illustrated Poetry
- gilded cage
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,500 poems.
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A bit of a take off of ~ the bird in the gilted cage. Loved the little illustration.
and lovely. Beautifully done. I'm glad I found this one. Thanks, LJ.
Pride - child of the marriage of self awareness and acceptance
Proud - Her Dad’s feeling when reading her poetry and seeing the words document the affirmation of her creativity and her beauty.
wow thanks for sending me back here, I swear I thought I left a comment before... I know I saw it before and loved it then too :)
i guess i forgot to sign in..this was fawnie trampin around your poetry..lol
Even though it was non-erotic, this poem actually got my heart beating faster... very evocative, and very elegant in its use of language. We need more of this sort of work.
A great one minsue. I loved the way you've done the illustration... from the cage to the words, it's done beautifully.
Write more gosling. Or I should say, submit more.
no matter how fancy the cage, the purpose it serves does not change. An excellent metaphoric look at what many call freedom today. Well done.
jim : )
The Poet Gosling, but the cage is to small for a goose...lol, great poem Min~ I see a shining star of poetry here and look forward to more.
Gosling, you do me proud. I can relate to this, especially today.
~A/J~
Very well done Min. Made me feel almost desperate, like I was circiling in the cage, looking for a way out too.
Bravo!
CD
poem to begin with
the visual adds another dimension
well done
Thank you