- Erotic Poetry
- not quite free
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wraps around
a day after night after day after...
and Ms, as hard as I try
I still steal, my crime,
your every gesture, word, sound --
declare me not sound of my mind
but be careful, you being on my mind
provides unknown to me grace and light
wlodzimierz holsztynski ©
1992
- COMMENTS
and SJ probably wont like me saying that, I wont apologize :)
I like the ending, yes I do. Its well stated and romantic.
These first 5 lines make the poem for me. Very cummingsesque especially in line 3 in the loving language that itself is twisted around as if dizzy with love.
"declare me not sound of my mind"
"the thread
wraps around
a day after night after day after...
and Ms, as hard as I try
I still steal, my crime,
your every gesture, word, sound --
declare me not sound of my mind"
The last two lines fell short, I would like to order a different ending please.
~anna