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Click hereShe is married, of course.
I can never find anyone
who isn't attached
however tenuous a ligament
might string from her thigh
to my point of action.
Even her vows are not
death to our love.
We all make mistakes
and often backtrack
from ill-considered opinions.
So. I shall have her,
if, of course, she'll consent
to have me, penurious swain,
whose hopes are cast
onto an Eastern talent
for flicking tongue just some way
here and there, about
the body, as if I could read
desire like lines
in an elegantly written poem.
Don't worry about me. This
one will be mine. Or,
if somehow not, I'll find another.
I can always find another.
.....what a find. Wonderful erotica with narry a crass word. You have a fan in me, will be looking for more.
if you meant the sardonic twist in language. Too much punctuation or too abrupt line breaks though. 5/5
great flow and a tone that manages to convey both need and authority. A pleasure to read.
Nicely written, great diction. "Pernurious swain" felt off, given the rest of the language.