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by UnderYourSpell

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vrosej10vrosej10over 14 years ago
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Sweet. Yes Aussie kids at the time did eat bread and dripping for dinner all the time. My nan, an old country woman from way back gave it to me too. Ah nostalgia, I'm having bread and dripping tonight, thank to your poem. Good stuff UnderYourSpell.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Ah, the 40’s!

Thanks for causing the bittersweet (mostly sweet) tears of nostalgia to form in the corner of my eye. I remember the bread and dripping well.

Best wishes from a ragged arsed ranger born January 1940; however I can’t claim being a cockney, well, only in heart.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
very cool, UYS!

Congrats on your green E. I found it very interesting. You'll still hear my usual plea for commas... LOL

Of course, I'll be mentioning it in today's review when I get a chance to write it.

IraniaIraniaover 14 years ago
More than just nice!

What a joy to wake up and read. I felt the words in my belly. Raney

champagne1982champagne1982over 14 years ago
You

Are crammed to the top with evocative and wonderful poetry. I can see their faces as they gazed out the garret and wondered about the dawn. Thanks for the poetry and congrats on the E.

EroticOrogenyEroticOrogenyover 14 years ago
Very evocative

YOu keep on coming up with great stuff!

bflagsstbflagsstover 14 years ago
I loved it

because it reminded me of Under Milk Wood. Good Work, Ma'am.

Epmd607Epmd607over 14 years ago
Agreeance

Good dialogue, straight outta the night sky.

greenmountaineergreenmountaineerover 14 years ago
Wow

I'm a sucker for any poem about the horror of war, particulary WWII, my parent's generation, the stories of which I do remember. As some of us say on this side of the pond, you nailed it. You inferred so much without having to say so much in a concise, vivid narrative. That's the kind of poetry I like, regardless of theme. Well done. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
*****

Five.

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
Little to say

I'm not going to add to what was already said, I saw the score, who'd you PO, left a 5, I was looking for a comment, I thought I saw, I found it.

epitomising kind of sticks out, but not sorely.

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