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Click hereHe wondered just how many of them there was likely to be and how many times that he'd have to cum for them. Surely there'd only be two or three anyway. He looked up from the computer as Julie entered his room. She was wearing a white crop top and a short denim skirt that made him want to peek to see what underwear she was wearing.
"Up to anything fun?" she asked him, eying off the tent in his shorts that clearly gave away his state of semi-arousal.
"Actually, I'm about to do something completely outrageous and dirty," he said to her.
"Cool, can I watch? Or help?" she asked.
"Well, I'm not about to do it right now, but I've just been planning to do it soon with hornylady."
"Ooo, tell me. What are you planning?" Steve told Julie about the plan that hornylady had hatched to have him stick his cock through a glory hole for the amusement of a number of women.
"Geez, that's kinky!" Julie replied when he'd finished telling her. "You know, when I think about it, you're pretty lucky, most guys I know only dream about ever getting involved in a threesome and you've already had a couple with Adriana and I. One of these days I'll have to have one with two guys to even out the numbers. I like the thought of getting a cock in my mouth and pussy at the same time."
"Well, if there's any way I can help, you know I'll be happy to fill either of those holes for you," laughed Steve. "Just thinking about it gets me ready to fuck," he added, massaging his growing erection.
"Yeah well I was looking for you the other day and couldn't find you. I ended up teasing Dad instead."
"What? How?" Steve asked.
"Well give me a couple of minutes and I'll come back and tell you, I just need to go to the toilet," Julie said, ideas forming in her mind. She went off to the toilet and quickly removed her panties. Hearing about Steve's plan with hornylady had got her as ready to fuck as Steve was and if she was going to tell him about what she'd done to their father, she thought she may as well surprise Steve with her new panty trick rather than tell him about it first. She had been wearing a black thong under her skirt but now set about stuffing it inside her pussy. When she'd finished, she walked back to Steve's room.
"So what is it that you did to Dad that teased him so much?" Steve asked her.
"This," she said, sitting on his bed with her legs positioned so that her pussy was exposed with a small piece of back fabric poking from between her bald lips.
"Oh my god, is that you underwear?" Steve asked as he studied his sister's pussy.
"Yeah, I put them inside me. The other day I was looking for you to surprise you, but you weren't home and I sat down on the couch near Dad, knowing that he could see."
"Holy crap, what did he do?" Julie told Steve about how she'd gone as far as pulling her panties out and licking them in front of him, trying to get him to do the same so that he might let her suck his cock or get him to lick her pussy.
"You really wanted that from Dad?" Steve asked a little cautiously.
"Yeah, I was so horny I would have fucked anything that day and Dad was the only one home. You don't have a problem with that, do you? I mean you're the one that told me that you'd fuck Mum if you had the chance and that you'd tossed off with her panties."
"No I don't really have a problem with it, its just that I hadn't considered it I guess. Sometimes I forget that you're every bit as kinky and horny as I am."
"Yeah, well he didn't do it, so that sucked."
"Or didn't as the case may be .." Steve laughed.
"Yeah, well speaking of sucking, do you feel like letting me wrap my lips around that cock of yours? It looks like it needs some relief."
"I thought you'd never ask ... " Steve said melodramatically as he quickly moved to remove his pants.
Julie pushed him back on the bed and lay down with her head on his stomach, the head of his cock between her lips as she used her hand to pump up and down his shaft and tease his balls, her tongue swirling around the head.
"Tell me,: she said, giving her mouth a break as she ran her fingers over his now wet head," have you had sex with hornylady again?
"Well, since you ask, I have actually," he replied.
"Did you see who she was?"
"No I didn't" he said, thinking that he hadn't actually seen, even though he'd worked out who it was.
"Tell me what you did while I suck you," Julie requested.
Steve began to relate the story of his encounter with hornylady and the friend that she'd introduced. Julie listened intently as she worked her mouth up and down her brother's erection.
"Damn, so you've had another threesome!" she said between mouthfuls. Steve continued, telling her how the last thing that he'd done had been to work his cock inside the newcomer's anus and fuck her butt, unleashing his cum inside her.
"You like anal sex, don't you?" Julie asked.
"Hell yeah, its so tight its unbelievable," Steve replied, "and there's something taboo about it that makes it exciting.
"Like fucking your sister huh?" Julie asked, her tongue teasing at the hole of his cock.
"Oh yes," Steve laughed in return.
"And do you think you'd like to put your big cock in my tight little bum hole?" she asked him before plunging down on him, taking what she could of his meat in her mouth.
"Really?"
Julie nodded.
"Well of course I would!" Julie was working him hard now, her mouth and hand pleasuring him in unison, driving him to the point where he exploded in her mouth. Julie drank down his seed and gently sucked his cock clean of the saliva that had run from her mouth during the process.
"So what now? Do I get to do your bum?" Steve asked excitedly.
"No, I think we should sell my anal virginity to our audience and let them pay to share it with us, don't you?"
"Sounds like a kinky plan to me," Steve said.
"Well you send out the emails and then come back and pull my thong out of my pussy before you fuck me with that nice stiff cock of yours," Julie told him. Steve got off of the bed and went to the computer to do what Julie had suggested. As he typed away on the computer, Julie pulled her top off over her head so that she was lying back on his bed in her black bra and skirt, with her legs spread and her bare pussy exposed to her brother, teasing him with the slip of fabric that was visible between her lips.
Steve hit send and then turned his attentions to his sister. He knelt down on the floor at the end of the bed and leaned over her pussy, getting his face nice and close, checking out the way the fabric sat poised, awaiting his attention. He ran a finger down her labia, either side of the thong before tugging on them gently, experimenting with how much effort it took to budge them. Then he decided to use his mouth and after licking around the thong on her lips for a bit, grabbed them between his teeth and began to pull his head back, slowly withdrawing the thong from its warm, wet home.
Finally they pulled completely free and Steve took them from his mouth with his hand, smelling them before wrapping them around his cock and giving it a couple of strokes. He lowered his face back down to Julie's pussy and started to lick her, teasing and pleasuring her clit.
"Fuck me Steve." Julie said after he had worked on her pussy for several minutes and her juices were well and truly flowing. Steve climbed up onto the bed and held his cock as he slid it between her lips, eliciting a moan of pleasure as Julie felt him spear his way between her.
"Oh God, it feels so good, it seems like too long since you filled me with this monster of 7yours," Julie said to him.
"I know what you mean, I've missed your tight little hole the last couple of days," Steve told her as he slid his cock back and forth. Julie moaned again as Steve worked her over, thrusting in and out of her bald pussy, watching as her lips slid along the shaft of his cock.
Julie reached her hands up to her brother's chest, pulling on his nipples and raking her nails over his pecs before wrapping her hands around behind him and holding his butt as he thrust at her again and again, her legs spread wide to accommodate his movements.
"Oh God, I've got to get on the pill so you can fill me up with your cum," Julie cried out as the two of them approached their moments of ecstasy.
"Fuck that would be awesome!" Steve said, redoubling his efforts and speed until he knew he was going to explode. He pulled his cock from her pussy and ejaculated, sending an arc of cum through the air, which landed on her black bra, a streak leading in a straight line back towards her pussy.
Julie dragged her finger through the cum and brought it to her mouth.
"Mmm, just as yummy as Daddy's," she said to herself absently.
"What?!" Steve said, startled, as he moved from between her legs.
"Oh yeah, I didn't quite tell you the full story. After I teased Daddy, I caught him wanking over some porno magazines just as he was cumming. I nicked one of them from him and licked the cum from it while he watched me. I said I'd give it back to him sometime," Julie admitted to her brother.
"You really are a kinky little perv!" Steve said to her.
"Yes, well what can I say, I've learned from the best," Julie said, pulling her top back on before kissing her brother and leaving his room.
Julie started to peel off her clothes. Her brother and mother were out and her father had just finished working in the garden and was now in the shower. She had decided that this was her opportunity. She'd sunbathed in the yard on and off all afternoon, letting her father see her in her new bikini, teasing him by releasing her straps, but not allowing him to see her breasts at all, ensuring that she kept them covered whenever she rolled over. She had let him catch her with her hand in her bottoms though as she gently stroked her pussy. She pretended to be completely unaware of Dave's presence and managed to maintain that façade through the afternoon.
She now hoped that her careful display had managed to do what she had hoped. She had noted that her Dad had spent quite a bit of the day with a hard-on and had restrained from doing anything more that might happen to put him off his horny state.
She quietly opened the door to the bathroom, hoping to get in without him realising straight away. As it happened, she was in luck, he was facing away from her as she entered the bathroom. She didn't close the door, afraid that the noise of it shutting would give her away. She checked out her father's body, tightly muscled from the workouts that he pursued religiously. He had one hand against the wall where the shower rose was, leaning forwards, the water spraying in an arc over the top of him to cascade down his back and over his tight butt before flowing down his legs.
He was slightly hunched and Julie realised that from his arm movements, he bust be working his hand up and down his cock. She moved quietly across the tiled floor and pulled the door open, stepping into the cascading water as he turned in shock at the noise and movement.
Before he could speak, she quickly wrapped her hand around his soapy cock and stroked it for him, working her hand over the smooth skin, feeling the firm strength of his pole beneath it. She quickly dropped to her knees so that it was at eye level and pulled on it so that the water cascaded over it and washed away the soap.
Dave watched as his daughter fell to her knees in the shower alcove and rinsed the soap from his cock. He knew he should stop her, but the sight of her breasts, of her hand snaking out to grab his cock had aroused him to the point that he was reduced to simply watching. He did nothing to encourage her, nor did he do anything to stop her as she opened her mouth and lowered it over the head of his cock until she had taken as much as she could and then sucked back along its length, her tongue teasing him as her lips passed back over the ridge of his helmet.
She sucked back and forth, her hands gently caressing his balls and massaging his shaft as her mouth worked him over.
Julie heard a moan escape her father's lips and felt him thrust his large cock at her mouth. She smiled around his shaft, knowing that she had him now, confident that he would now fuck her just like she wanted him to. She looked up towards his face and saw him gazing lustfully down upon her pleasuring him. She smiled again and as her eyes met his, felt him flinch as his cock unleashed its load into her mouth. She swallowed the first spurt and then let the rest wash out of her mouth and down her chin as she grinned up at her father.
"Isn't that much better than a soapy hand Daddy?" she asked him, standing up, dragging her body along his as she did so.
"I have to confess that it was, but ..."
"No buts Daddy, I wanted it and I want more, you just have to relax a little and enjoy it, why don't you wash my dirty body for me?" Julie pressed before he could get an objection in as she started to rub soap over her ripe, firm breasts.
Dave watched the way his daughter's breasts slid through her soapy hands, the way her fingers pushed at the skin and caught at the erect nipples. Regardless of what his moral compass was saying, he knew that at that moment there was nothing more he desired than to feel the weight of Julie's breasts in his hands. He reached out and cupped her breasts, marveling at the delightful sensation before using the soap to slide all over and around them, the nipples rock-like beneath his palms.
Julie leaned back against the wall of the shower and took her father's dick in her hands again, tugging gently at it as he enjoyed playing with and exploring her breasts. She gasped as he pulled at her nipples and rolled them in between his fingers, pulling them away from her breasts before allowing them to slide from between his fingers He allowed the water of the shower to cascade over them washing away the soap.
Dave bent his head to his daughter's breast and took her taught nipple within his mouth sucking on it, flicking it with his tongue and rolling it between his teeth gently.
"God that feels good, Daddy," he heard his daughter say and felt his cock twitch in response to her ministrations, his erection beginning to build again after its earlier efforts. Dave allowed one of his hands to travel slickly over the tight skin of Julie's stomach, seeking to go further, to find her nest of pleasure. His fingers danced over her bald mound and then ran along her naked lips before targeting her hole. He felt Julie shift her weight, separating her legs as his fingers speared inside her, his mouth biting down on her nipple at the same time
Julie arched her back in response to the pleasurable pain in her nipple and the penetration of her pussy. Her father swapped nipples and Julie spread her legs further apart as her father slipped a second finger between her legs, now working two of them in and out of her, exploring her tender, wet depths.
"I want to feel this lovely cock in my pussy Daddy, turn the water off and fuck me with it."
Dave hesitated. Was he really going to do this? His hand was on the tap as he battled within his mind. If he didn't stop now he'd never be able to say no again, he knew that his resistance had been eroded by Julie's willing and persistent attacks on his desire. The water was off.
Julie turned her back on her father, placing her hands against the wall of the shower and Dave guided his cock between her arse cheeks until he felt himself slide between her slick bald lips. His daughter was thrusting herself back against him, encouraging him as he sank deeper and deeper inside her being. He reached around with his hands to cup her amazing breasts as he rocked his hips backwards and forwards, his cock sliding effortlessly in and out of her amazingly tight hole. He tried to push his entire cock inside her, but she asked him not to go too deep because it hurt, "the curse of having such a monster," he thought to himself. Plenty of women had wanted it over the years but they typically couldn't take the entire thing. He found himself wondering whether his son had ever had that problem yet. The sight of Julie writhing and squirming her butt as he fucked her soon brought him back to reality though.
Dave moved his hands from Julie's breasts to her hips and used them to leverage his thrusts. Julie removed one hand from the wall in front of her and lowered it to her pussy where she used her fingers to stimulate her clitoris, flicking, pulling and rubbing at it to flame her pleasure.
Julie moaned loudly as she felt her climax build, her father's cock spreading her lips wide as he sank within her again and again.
"Oh yeah, fill me with your cock Daddy, fuck me with it!" She cried out. John nearly came on the spot as his daughter filled the shower alcove with her dirty request and then she was cumming. He could feel her pussy as it clenched and grasped at the invader in its midst. Dave announced that he too was going to cum and Julie quickly pulled herself off of his shaft, turning and in the process, slipping to the floor of the shower. Dave exploded, his cum spurting out to splash on top of her head as he attempted to stop Julie from crashing to the wet floor. Julie looked up and copped his second spurt on her face, breaking into a grin and laughing.
Dave sighed in relief and then joined her laughter once he realised she had landed without hurting herself.
"Not quite the way I had planned on finishing," Julie said to him as she clambered to her feet and turned the water back on. Dave surveyed his daughter's body and was suddenly struck by what he had done as she bent her head to wash his cum from her hair. He opened the door and stepped from the shower, grabbing a towel and heading for his bed room.
Julie stepped out of the shower after she'd washed her hair and dried herself with the towel. She hung it up and left the bathroom, still naked, to see where her father had gone. She stuck her head into his bedroom and saw him sitting on the side of his bed, wrapped in a towel, his head in his hands.
"What's up Daddy?" she asked him.
"Julie, this is wrong, I'm sorry, I shouldn't have done what I did, you caught me in a moment of weakness, I promise it won't happen again."
"But I want it to happen again," she said moving into the bedroom. "I love you Daddy and I want to be able to share my pleasure with you. I'd be more upset if you didn't fuck me again! Please don't say it won't happen again .."
"It can't Julie, I love you too and you're incredibly beautiful, but it just can't," he said, his eyes taking in her nakedness, his mind hating himself for the reaction his loins had to the sight.
"If it doesn't, you're going to wonder for the rest of your life what my pussy tastes like you know ... don't' decide just now, let it be for a couple of days, then let us see if you still feel the same way."
"Julie, please, just let this go."
"I can't Daddy, I want it too much. I'll leave you now, but when you dream, you know you're going to dream about fucking me ... it doesn't have to be only in your dreams, don't forget that," Julie said to her father as she turned and left the room, returning to her own to dress.
- COMMENTS
Usually monster cocks and big tits are a little too much to believe, but in this case I’ll give you a pass! (you did add some smaller tits too the mix). Very arousing story, with some good twosts snd turns. Thanks.
Not my cup of tea, hate oversized penis, big boobs, totally unbelievable. As Mark twain said, "truth is stranger than fiction since fiction has to be believable." I did like a few of your stories not this one.
Nicely written, always interesting and a wonderfully erotic fantasy. I admire an author who obviously tastes the trouble to write engagingly and with consideration to an interesting story line. A couple of areas could benefit from careful proofreading but I enjoyed reading this. When I finished one chapter, I was always intrigued to move to the next.
Nikki_2021, you are a terrific writer. Too many of the folks that put up stories here get pretty boring. All the continuous sex was really exciting as you enveloped more and more of the family into the story. There were moments when I think that a little more proof reading and editing might be needed, but still the narrative is terrific.
[["I don't think so Jules," Alexis said.
"We'll see," Julie replied, tucking her skirt up under its waist band so that her pussy remained exposed while she helped to finish off the dishes. It wasn't long until they heard approaching footsteps and Alexis hissed at Julie that enough was enough and that she should now make herself decent.
"As soon as you promise." Julie wondered whether Alexis would cave in or not and who was about to walk into the kitchen, Mary or John? She was finding it incredibly exciting and her pussy was getting wetter and wetter with the tension of the situation. She was determined not to be the one to concede and stood in the corner with her hands at her sides, Alexis' eyes boring into her own, no evidence of which way she would end up going.
Just as Julie was about to brace herself to be exposed to her Aunt or Uncle, she saw in Alexis' eyes that she was wavering.
"Ok," hissed Alexis. Julie quickly flipped her skirt free and covered herself, just as her Aunt walked into the room. Mary went to the fridge and poured herself a drink before heading back out to the lounge room to watch some more television.
"Yay, I can't wait!" Julie laughed as the others all sighed their relief upon Mary's exit.]]
I'm sorry, but this part is rape to me. Alexis isn't as into girls as her sister and cousin is. I liked Julie up to this point now I see her as a spoiled, horny bully who only wants to get her way.
This story was written in 2005, where does it still shave the pussy? It's not practical because then the hair grows and pricks, and adult women grow hair on the inside of their large labia as well. You can't torture women like that! My wife and I went through this a long time ago, and knowing my love of bare pubes, she always used a depilatory cream, there are a lot of them now. Anyway, it's an interesting story, we'll see how it continues.
Like they say: 'the family that plays together stays together'. A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.
Great chapters although I don't know why Steve didn't tell Olivia he knew who she was
this is soooooooo good! love all the little connections you spent time creating, not just a full out family orgy first thing.... although i'm definitely hoping it builds to that!
Damn this story is extremely HOT 🥵, now I’m really looking forward to reading the rest of it. This story deserves a 10 out of 5 stars it is s damned good!!!!
Absolutely loved the story. The build up was great. Please do another chapter with the whole family together
Absolutely fucking red hot. Just wish that you would use the word Cunt instead of pussy. And if you like, mix it worth the word Quim or Hunny pot. Cunt crazed fucker Lanc,s UK.
🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆!❤️❤️❤️!
You sure hit all my buttons.
Great writing!
Great imagination!
Great uninhibited sex!!!
Outstanding story line. Great characters. Please continue future chapters.
Fuck, am I hard. At my age, I wish had a sister or mother like Steve. I have his cock, I'm going to read the next series. Hope all get together for a great cumming time.
Nikki_2021, that is absolutely an awesome story indeed. It never slows down for an instant. I love your imagination for writing. I will definitely read the rest of the chapters, and hopefully, maybe there's more to come. Thank you so much.
Wow, I have never cum so many times to one story. Thank You. My dick hurts now. In a good way.
All other criticism aside, I’m loving your stories! Your writing style keeps me coming back and your dirty imagination keeps me interested- I can only read about 3-4 pages at a time as I get harder and harder from the seductive situations and beautiful descriptions- then I have to close my eyes, place myself in the perspective of one of the characters, and stroke my hard cock until I cum all over myself. And isn’t that what we want erotica to do? Great work Nikki, keep it coming!
A little difficult keeping up with the characters, but worth it.
Keep up the story.
Can’t wait for the next chapter.
There were so many different scenarios here it became totally confusing. Should have stuck to brother / sister then parents. The cousins, aunts/uncles, internet sites could have been really good follow up stories. I just had to give up at about page 13 or so - cant be sure because I was losing the will to live at that stage. That said the author obviously is very talented but needs to stop trying to eat the whole Christmas cake in one bite!
I just read these 23 pages while stroking my hard cock. I can't believe I was able to hold off coming until the end. I've enjoyed every scene that appeared in my mind as I read. The last one of you fucking your father in the shower was too much for me and I shot my load. Thank you for this story.
Ron
My rating could be higher. Erotic build would help. Literotica does not have to be one very quick escapade followed by another. Many stories do not appear to have been proofread and subsequently edited. This is an example of improper grammar distracting the reader. This author and many others on this site need to learn better plot structure in that they move quickly from one scenario to the other so fast that the reader has to mentally take note and figure things out rather than enjoy the flow of good writing. Authors, please take heed!!!
This had me so horny fingering myself that I couldn't help but to comment. I really love this story and I'm glad you're continuing it; I can't wait to see what more you come up with... I do have to say that there were quite a few spelling and grammatical errors in the story, though.If you re-read it you'll see what I mean.
This is one of the beat stories in the genre. Period. I am so glad to have found your work. Keep it up, and I look forward to reading more!
I just read chapters 1-6 and it was pretty good at first but I think you let the situation with the parents drag on too long. I kind of agree with some of what some people have posted about the brother and sister not really loving each other the way they could. I think it would have been fun if they loved each other but in the way poly couples do where they aren't jealous when the other sleeps with someone else as long as they share what happened and possibly the person they had sex with but ultimately they are the main person in the others life. I also think they should have plotted to seduce their mother and father and from there the aunts family that way they could be one big happy incestuous family. who knows how far they could take it and how many family members they could convert to their way of thinking not to mention the web shows. the sex scenes were a little tame and the women were completely in charge and I didn't like that as much it would have been good if the brother and sister were a team her maybe slightly less dominate but work really well together seducing others. this with some changes and a little bit better sex scenes could be a great continuing series.
most incest stories happen when the siblings are in love with each other and finally realise it, or when after having sex they realize they hold more then just regular sibling love for each other and therefore want to spend the rest of their lives with each other. Here Julie is just a whore who is willing to fuck whatever cock is closest whether its her dads or uncles or brothers. As for Steve he will fuck anyone as pussy is just pussy for him. i started this book thinking he was going to fall in love with his sister but clearly not as he doesnt even mind her fucking other people and he himself is fucking everyone and anyone. This should be in Erotic Couplings or Something even with all the incest.
This was looking so promising and while i did enjoy it, you absolutely ruined it for me. There was no love between Steve and Julie it was just fucking for physical pleasure and conveniance more then anything else. I could have gotten used to the idea of then doing internet shows for money but the fact that Julie is basically willing to fuck her dad and uncle and who knows who else is a major turn off. steve has fucked both his cousins, his mum and maybe even his aunt. I wanted Julie And Steve to only sleep with each other and develope deep feelings of true love for the other. I hate the fact that you basically just made every character fuck every other character. There was no special bond or relationship between the siblings it was just for conveniance and cos he had a big cock and she nice tits etc. This is the story ive ever rated 2 stars only...
My mistake. I read Chapters 1 - 6; thats 23 pages. Moving on to Chapters 7 - 11.
I love that you combined all of those chapters in 1 post.
I think that Steve is a superman.
I love that all of the women in the family are such sluts.
Good story line.
Please don't let Julie, or any of the women get preggers.
I would have loved to rate the story with 5*s but I couldn't because of the editing; or should I say lack of it. I am still anxiously waiting to read the next chapters that you have already posted.
THANK YOU!
Nikki, You are great. Your narrative is easy and your story-line is nicely thought out. Incest is a difficult subject for many writers and I have seen many authors on this site go to painful lengths to introduce the first taboo act in the story line. You deal with the subject of incest much more competently. While still acknowledging that incest is a taboo act, you are able to deal with it much more easily, yet believably. A rare talent in dealing with this complicated subject.
I also liked the section where the two elderly sisters - Olivia and Mary, decide to have sex. It is so believably, delicately and romantically described.
A couple of mistakes in names of characters were seen, which needed a little bit of guessing by the reader to figure out who the real character should have been. But totally forgivable considering you have given countless hours of your valuable time to amuse and entertain us all.
Good story so far despite quite a lot of grammar / typos :( - Would have got 5 stars if it wasn't for them...
Think there was at least one use of the wrong character name - you used John were I think it should have been Dave.
Also, from personal preference, I would like to see some form of paragraph separator to show when the scene changes as I find it easier to read like that.
Nice story. Well written a bunch of grammer mistakes. But i found myself reading through them with minimal to no problem. Completely enthralled by the lust and sexyness portrayed by your characters and scenes. Would love to see more of this show up eventually. It appears the only downside is that i eventually finished it. With love reader.
I’ve been reading stories om here for a long time, To me this is one of the best that I have read, can’t wait for the rest if it!
Spell binding. Number of characters was surprising. All that was missing is the family pet. Hope to read the final chapters soon.
but definitely not for building up a story this is by far too long and gets boring after the very first parts.
Can't wait to read the rest! Was hoping this first part would end with her father and her. Can't wait for the while family to realize what's been happening and come together in a huge orgy! ;-3
Someone please make this into a film!!!!
This was amazing Nikki you are a star!!
What a talent, you r a very good writer, I was waiting for the part when Steve will tell his mom, that he knows, and hoping for Steve, Julie and Olivia threesome
I was dripping wet when reading this and I must have came half a hundred tmes at least ;) Nikki you are the best!
I was literally dripping wet after reading this. You have a talent for sure
So glad another writer referred Nikki .. 'cus this was an awesome story producing many hard ons. I'm a little sore, but well worth it.
Look forward to more...
Thx Nikki
A few errors of names, but the story is awesome. My cock was hard on every page.
Im on the bus reading page 10 and i have the biggest hard on very noticeable you have a way with words keep writing ^_^
Great jobs nikki I started reading this at work and got a huge cock stand what happened next is another story
This is one of the best story's yet, one thing I want is the whole family get together with everybody there, I day dream about this and would love to have been Steve. A threesome is my dream but I can say keep up the good writing and give more of A Brother & Sister story.
Good story found myself going to libary to get all pages damn nikki what have u done to me lmaol
Love reading this story, read some parts, cum, then come back pick up where I left of and cum again. I can't wait to see if the two families wind up in one big FUCKFEAST !
This is such a good story, It's a gift that keeps on giving. AND TO ALL THE PEOPLE SAYING IT'S TOO LONG, THERE IS SUCH A THING AS LEAVING IT AND THEN COMING BACK LATER TO FINISH READING IT, DUH, NOT ROCKET SCIENCE, other than that, yeah, possible my favourite all time.
Loved the story, very well written. It had a little bit of everything and there was attention to detail - I love it. But it can't end here?! The story must go on, I need to know what happens next. I'm anticipating a part 2 to this story!
God what a waste -you should have stopped after a few pages. Didn't writing this get awfully boring? Reading this cranked out garbage was impossible- I scanned the story after the fifth page- just unreadable after a while. You need to find another hobby
Too damn long and don't even bother part 2. only food shelter shitheads can try finish part 1
What a story!!!! This has it all, And it is so well written you definitely know how to write a story babygirl
I loved how intricate and well thought out the plot is. Plus it's got a little of everything, brother/sister, sister/sister, father/daughter, mother/son. There's definitely something for everyone in this gem. Totally favoriting this author and story. Looking forward to reading more from this author.
A great piece of creative writing I loved it and will add you as my first favorite author. I particularly liked the way that you dealt with the cognitive dissonance of the relations!
Singe aka summore or summ3 on this site
Unbelievable, the first story for what I needed more than a week to read. ..
You did a good joob :-)
No long entry here. I've been using this site for awhile now and when other stories fail to please me, this story fulfills every time.
Very sexy story and so well told. I never had a sister, but I'm sure I would have been sniffing her panties and trying to see her naked. Maybe she'd have felt the same . . . heaven on earth!
I used to play with my sister's pussy and she let me eat her a couple of times. She would give me handjobs and once in a while suck me off too. This story brings back some fond feelings.
Loved the girl-on-girl parts, and the older guy with younger girl, and the Mother-Aunt-Son trio.
Looking forward to the family finding out that Steve and Julie started the whole thing, and they are going to control everyone else.
This story is so damned hot, it lasted me for a couple of days and I lost count how many times I came reading this all the way through! I can't wait to read chapters 7-11! My favorite part started as Steve and Julie, but Julie and her cousin comes in at a close second! I want to see how the relationship between the two cousins develops, and find out what happens now that Steve knows who hornylady is...honestly, the bits of Julie and her dad/uncle and the bits with the mom and aunt together weren't as hot, but it just added to the feeling of a coming climax where all the incest comes together as everyone's secrets are revealed and both families have a giant orgy...I don't know, but like I said, I can't wait to read the rest of this story, it was absolutely amazing and I'd give it six stars if I could. This is the first time a story has ever been so good that I commented on it, and I'd favorite it if I had an account! <3
This story had me on edge the whole time its so damn arousing man, you make me want to take a peek at my own folks, but its better off as a fantasy as sexy, smutty, wet undies ready to explode fantasy but a fantasy no-the-less, keep writing cause damn that was hot!
I'm in awe if this story! I was achingly aroused tge whole time reading it. I hope to read more on this story!!i love love love it!!!
An example of how this part could have more detail:
Steve fast forwarded the tape up to the point where his sister entered the room and then began stroking himself in earnest as she removed her pajamas to display her body. He kept pausing it every time there was a good view of her breasts. He could barely wait to see her pussy. When she finally dropped her pajama bottoms she turned and he only got a quick glimpse. He did see enough that she was not fully shaved like his Mom. Then, as she turned back toward the camera again, he got a good look. Her puffy mound was covered with wisps of dark blonde hair at the top and not much lower down. The hair seemed to be completely absent lower down but he could not see all that much pink below. Like with some pussies hers was less vertical and more horizontal and hard to see when she was standing up straight. He hoped for a better angle of view sometime later. His cock was rigid and hard as steel at this point. He couldn't wait for a chance to watch this on the big TV. With just another stroke he came hard again - squirting all over the bathroom wall. He carefully wiped the wall clean and put the camera away, having to get ready for uni. All day he found himself comparing the girls to his sister and Mom, wondering if any of them shaved, or how pert their breasts were when released from a confining bra.