All Comments on 'A Dragon's Tale Ch. 35'
by Antiproton
- 19 Comments
i really do love reading this story. just wish it wasn't so long between chapters.
guess i will have to start at the beginning after it is finished.
Just wish Ethan would hurry up and get Kendra it’s Rachel all over again lol and how he will get Selene is a complete mystery to me lol love this and like everyone else the wait Is so bad lol
Damn. Another long wait. But it’s so worth it. This story is one of the things I look towards at the beginning of ever month.
Excellent excellent excellent
Another great chapter.
Waiting for a month is so hard
Lovely story with lots of twists and turns .. good distraction from the real world!! Keep on writing please...
What was going on with the last page? It felt like changes got edited in, but the previous versions were also left in place. It was very clunky.
(That being said, this is an excellent story and I can't wait for more!)
"The walked purposely away from the tavern until they'd rounded a corner"
They
Yet another great chapter 👌🏻
About a month ago I discovered this series. I didn’t have high hopes at first but I started from the beginning. I had it finished in two days. Now I’m stuck waiting another month before I can read it again, and you have thoroughly made your story my favorite.
I loved it. The pacing is really, really good; an so is all the character development.
I just realized Beth’s full name was Elisabeth Borden, and her father is a rich asshole. Hopefully there’s no need for her to break out any axes in the near future.
A riveting story. Unfortunately I think I may leave it till there is enough to chew on to make investing the time (reviewing the characters and rhythm of the story takes a good bit or re-reading...).
The one big editorial issue: "so the two women were laying with her heads on Ethan's stomach" Beside that, there were a dozen or more littl;e slips. I had to wonder if the editors where reviewing for content and storyline or grammatical precision (obviously not precision, unless they were recent public school graduates - hahaha)
Further comment on or about Thanksgiving.
Smokepole
Good story some glitches but overall a good read. Waiting for the rest now!
This is the best harem story ever it literally combines excellent plot, smut, and wholesome ethical harems it's like having your cake and eating it too. The girls are not interchangeable sex toys they are characters with their own connection to Ethan which gives their dynamic some depth while also providing to the readers base level shallow appeal of sheer sexual diversity inherent to all harem fantasies. It's like having a super model girlfriend who also has a great personality she appealing for both shallow and deep reasons it's the best of both worlds.
I am impressed that you have restrained yourself from training Beth (Elizabeth Borden) with a weapon like a throwing ax, ... impressive story arc, ... just wondering if ole unwashed, bearded, mole-face man was going to lead the girls to Sarah, ... ;-) TTFN
It wasn't until I saw her full name, Elizabeth Borden, that it clicked in my head. However, Beth is not a Lizzy Borden.
Even with the new editor, there is still trouble with the structure of locations. Such as;
>Kendra leaned out slightly and looked down
>so she could see the drop-dead gorgeous Brazilian woman,
>who was doing the same.
Would not if one person is looking down, then the other would look up? Since the hammock positioning was described in flat square (not stacked bunks), why is vertical positioning a part of looking at each other?
Then four paragraphs later;
>The dragon huntress looked up at her.
Which is it, up or down?
I am continuing this archive binge, so instances of location instability (along with issues others have mentioned, such as repetition) are evidently not deal-breakers for me, but they do keep tripping my Willing Suspension Of Disbelief :{