All Comments on 'A Girl by the Name of Alayna Ch. 02'

Outstanding story. I loved reading this story & I hope that chapter gets posted soon. Please continue writing this story.

Excellent story. Its developing extremely well, i am super intrigued. Please hurry and give me more =D

I know this is in the 'lesbian sex' section, but surely this and some others belong in a seperate section called 'lesbian love'. Shorty, you described some of the most intense love making I have ever read. Now for crude part, reading this I got so hard and Im amazed it is not made up. Wish us guys were able to connect with a woman on that sort of level. It is so symbiotic. But I guess thats love, Ive yet to feel that emotion. Thanks for a great story. Its extremly moving.

This is one very hot story. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I hope you will post it soon.

This is one HOT story. Please post the next chapter soon.

Wassup on tha 'Lake Trip' ?? Excellent job! I love your stories. The intense physical connection and the love that these characters have for each other is amazing.. Impatiently waitin on yu to write again....

What happened on the Lake Trip?! I love this story and can't wait to read what happened next. Please come back and give us the next chapter!

I love music, particularly R&B, and I know every song you've mentioned so far! It's crazy cause I know exactly what you mean by the importance of each song, its lyrics, and why it wouldn't hurt to listen if readers haven't heard of them. That combined with the build up to the story (Chapter 1) and your writing skills makes this series ON POINT. I love the fact that you two were friends and got together. Thanks for writing, looking forward to more (:

What happened to the next installment??

You wrote at the end that you will continue the story, although you never have. Why?

Regardless of the hot sex, which I didn't really read, the story was amazing. The fear the love the intense feelings... I really hope you will continue this story.

Yours Jess

And I wish you had continued it, it has so much capacity to be expanded! Thank you for sharing it with us!

And I loved the pacing. Right speed for me.

Great story well told. what happened to the next part?