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Click hereSomething told her that he would need her in the coming weeks. She didn't have any real foresight, not as a skill set like her other abilities. But sometimes she just knew when she was needed at a given point in time. She had felt it just before she had met Dayton for the first time all those decades ago and she felt it now.
She knew she was in the right place at the right time. The question was, why was she needed here?
To be continued...
- COMMENTS
A Long Walk Home is so enchanting and captivating....Even shared it with my teenage daughter a few years back...hehe...Keep up the fantastic work....please be well. Know we love your writing...take care "-))
Awesome start to my binge reading. Found you through your cameo in boneams work. Thanks for your sharing.
I’m late to the show, but is it too late to become a groupie?!?! This story speaks to my soul. I have dreams of all these stories becoming books and I can tell people how I read them online before being published. 😊😊😊
The minute Dayton was mentioned I knew he would be Freya's mate. That's great, I can't wait to see how this "courtship" fares AND who will be the Werecat, Rayne's mate!
The sexy Dayton Alexander!!! My favorite were (J Hanlon is a close second)! Love this story! Considering this is the 20th plus time I've read it. :)
I realised this was another of the series half way through Hearts of Warriors.
I wish there was a way to label them so we could tell easily that they were all in the same series and had to be read in an order.
O boy this is going to be good. I'm giggling like a school girl. love it when characters feel like there getting dragged in front of firing squad to find love and happiness.
This might come across wrong but Yay!!! A character or two who are damaged goods. It is nice to see a story where the main character isn't all perfect.
you sure sucked me into another story!! You always do that lol can't wait to see how the story unfolds
Werecats -- rarely written about, as far as I can tell. This should be interesting.
your infatuation with long hair on man is just so ridiculous :D
I always have to fast skip over the passages when you describe your male characters in detail before I fall from my chair laughing, hurting myself in the process.
Until i clicked on this story......shit i cant believe i lied to myself btw ur story seriously captured my interest...
xoxo
Aria
i can see a future of long nights ahead reading this story......and i can't wait! As ususal you've got me hooked from the first chapter.
you really really shouldnt back post comments! or at least give warning about it.
Well that is easy, this is an absolutely amazing author who can hooking you to her stories. You will be dying for an injection of her steamy books and plot twists!
Heeeere kitty kitty kitty kitty, nice pussy!
I'm intrigued. Must. Keep. Reading....
Hey Jaz! I love the "charisma" dripping off of Dayton~ lol Thanx for the share, dear.
Zee~
Since I already commented, and can't comment again:
Is Rayne going to be a were-vamp hybrid? And I'm assuming that person who found her when tracked was Gard? Can't wait for chap. 3 :P
JC...I've been a fan for such a long time...all the stories, the characters are so real that I think there are weres somewhere on the planet (just kidding...lol)! Do you know how often I've checked to see if a new story was up....which is why this is happy new year to me. Thank you...keep up the good work, keep the stories coming, be it romance, were/vamp, fantasy, tho I'd prefer were/vamp, but hey beggars aren't choosers and am certainly begging!
well i for one will read anything you share with us... Tho i am glad u decided to stick with the hanlon world for a little longer. Thanks for sharing. Im off to check out chapter 2!
This story has been on for less than a week and you already have 61 comments.This means that you have so much more to give and your readers have so much more to take!!!!!
Now stop all this..."I am not going to continue and I want to branch out"stuff and please continue!!!!
From this chapter I know I am in for the ride of my life and if you run out of ideas consult me( for a fee of course!!!!!!LOL)
Good going!!!!!!
great story cant wait for the next chapter and im not sure whats gonna happen next i like that nd dont at the same time XD not sure if hes gonna find a mate in freya or not who knows
great story cant wait for next chapter and im not sure whats gonna happen really if hes gonna find a new mate or not in freya who knows
Quick intro of a couple of intriguing characters suggests this will be up to the standard of your other stories.
I am so happy you have picked up with fiona and dreaydons story :)
YAY a new story :) I adore your were series and this one has already sucked me in. I'm looking forward to the next chapter !!! LOVE YOUR WORK :) Keep on writing, were, fantasy, or whatever else!!!! :)
I re-read all of your previous stories at the conclusion of 'The Council' to simply fill the void until you submitted something new. As I have always said, I am eagerly awaiting your next installment.
You are back, you are back - whoooooppeeeee and woooohooooo. And what a great way to start. great story already. You have beenso missed my dear friend. I am so happy to see you posting stories again Thank you, thank you, thank you. hugs, Kate
you are back! can't wait for the next chapter.........you are the best!!
So glad to be able to have something worthwhile to read and look forward to. THANK YOU.
As always, U Rock!! Keep up the wonderful writing!
Hook, line, and sinker, as usual...lol. I can see fireworks in the future. Freya and Dayton and Rayne and Gard...lol..DAAAAMMNN!!! Uhh...did I say fireworks? That may be a mild understatement...hehehehehe. All I can say is that you and whitesabretooth are my absolute favorite authors...bar none. I know you said you wanted to branch out to other things, but perhaps you could come back to these wonderful people to tell us about the kids.....we can't forget about the kids and where and who THEY find love and mates with.....please say we can't...lol Terri
I just found this new update! I can't express in words how excited and happy I feel knowing that I'll have something fantastic, imaginative, compelling and yes BRILLIANT to read every week or so.
To tell you that the last few weeks without your words have been punishing is a major understatement. It seems that after reading all your stories for quite possibly the 10th time I moved onto your favourites, and then their favourites and then their favourites and...well you can see where I'm going with this. It also became apparent that excluding yourself, the guild and a few others there is a sorry lack of soul-grabbing stories on this site, stories that just make you want to sigh.
So I thank you, with all my heart and soul for continuing to no only make me sigh but cry, laugh, yell, throw things, shout for joy and scream 'BRILLIANT' to the heavens. I can't wait for the next chapter as this series promises to add to your ever going fan base and exceed all my expectations regarding your BRILLIANT (yes I got it in again) writtings.
Keep up the great work your groupie - Zooey
Cedar has 2 girls??? Poor Alexei, I almost feel sorry for him . . .NOT! LOL!
Dayton's sounds yummy and Freya? Well she's being Freya as usual.
Can't wait to see what happens. More please.
Oh, and welcome back MEJ
Boy am I glad I logged on tonight, Jaz. Von
What an exciting and fresh perspective on some of our favorite characters! I can't wait to see the story develop. It makes any day better to see your name appear beneath a new title. :)
Dayton sounds like a dream - I waiting with baited breath
welcome back; hope you are rested after your (short) hiatus. missed you.
dayton alexander at last! (squeal) and every bit gorgeous as expected.
watch out freya or should it be watch out dayton? (hehehe)
have to agree with willieone with who i’d like to see paired, but it’s all up to you in the end, gal.
fantasy, ahh. still a category where vampires and weres appear!!
2.30am in uk, once a jazcullen chapter is seen, it must be devoured.
you’ve got us hooked, just reel us in, again! ;0)
It's fantastic beginning Jaz. And as always leaves us hungering for more.
You nail it again, got me hook from the get go. looking forward to the developing of this exiting story.
Ok from Freya's reaction to Dayton we know he will be her mate at some point down the line, although it may be kicking and screaming. LOL I was thinking Rayne would make a great mate for Gard I think they both have the same need to end their solitude and it would make her part of Annie's little family and part of Rafe's pack by default.Which reminds me how did Dayton become one of Rafe's pack did Jared just pass him over to Rafe because he already had Aaron and Cedar and couldn't Rafe communicate with him through the Alpha link? So many questions can't wait for the answers.
BTW I am thrilled that Ash and Nors have a son, can just see the ancient going all soppy over his boy! These hybred kids are going to be the most well trained loved,strong warriors when they grow up!
OK!!!! So you at it again!!!!! Ok! Im stretching out my back, cracking my knuckles and bracing for the impact of your words!!! I've got my kleenex and I'm ready when you are!!!!! Oh! Your romances were truly Bad Ass!!!! Snaps and Kudos on them! Now hurry with the next chapter to this new saga!!!!! Your fantabulous HHIC!!!!
(Sorry, couldn't help myself! I loved her poem so much that I felt I should be a copycat and express my thanks in a similar fashion)
Poetry I cannot do
Although my admiration has grown for you
Week in, week out
I sit
Praying for another hit
Looking out for a little yellow sign
Something, anything to comfort my mind
But alas, I had given up all hope
And unstable, in my abilities to cope
Till a tweet in my ear
and a slap on my rear
Pointed me in your direction
Saying
'She has posted another, with vampire selections'
So I quickly ran to the library to open my browser
Swearing at the world for blowing my house off
Cringing at the noisy clerk
and the overconfident flirting jerk
I bury myself deeper in the corner
Praying the page will hurry in its freakin' load up
Reading line after line
Praying no one will question my crying
I sat back as if I had partaken a feast
Finding myself at peace
Comforted once more
till I realise
7 days till I get an encore!
What an overture! You do know how to set the stage, dear Jazz. My mouth is salivating just at the thought of the juicy story you're throwing us this time. Damn I want to know what's up with Rayne. I mean scent-masking and and hiding in shadows isn't anything your typical weres can do. Admittedly all of the ones we saw so far were wolves, but I would hate for them to loose out on extras, just cause they are wolves. Make it good, will ya?
And I would so love to see your attempts at fantasy. You got the twisted imagination necessary to build truly captivating worlds, as you have already proven. Keep it up. We really love your works.
Once again, I am instantly ADDICTED!!!! So glad that you are back in this world, I loved your romance stories too though I am slightly more attached to the characters in this world. I am so loving this one already. I have one question though, it seems that I recognize the name Rayne, but can't place where in the story I had heard her name before. Was she mentioned in this world before maybe? Keep going please and I did not see anything that needed editing, just keep posting, even without an editor, it's fantastic!!!