All Comments on 'A Mother's Temptations Pt. 01'

Looking forward to more. Great start.

Most of the time it's the horny son. Both mom and I faked being drunker than we were. Only years later did we admit it.

Can't wait to read the next part.

Thanks!

Plz keep going. This story has so much potential.

Should add the sister watching next time and then trying what her mother did

please do a 2nd chapter

Good potential. Hoping for more chapters.

Looking forward to the next chapter but leave out the sister. Continue with the son and mom.

A woman feeling the clock ticking, she needs to get pregnant. Feel her belly swell with her sons bastard baby.

Comments, feedback, thoughts, opinions, and emails about the story or your own similar fantasies are welcome.

Waiting to see if mom get more of her son's cock. Will she sneak in again when he is drunk?

Funny, I did share my thoughts on the subject of this story as asked, but my comments disappeared. What's that saying, be careful of what you ask...

Wow!

The story was hot, but your misuse of commas, the sentences with missing words or misspelled words, and the run-on sentences were very distracting. I would humbly suggest that you find yourself a good editor to clean up your grammatical mistakes before you submit them. 3 stars from me.

Very nice story!!! Why all the comments so negative? Gave it 4 stars!! Waiting on more!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Awesome 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!