All Comments on 'A Nephew's Mistletoe Magic Pt. 03'

I've just read three awesome chapters! Janet is hot and really has taken to Oliver. I wonder if Janet is still in the child bearing range and if this will come up. Please keep going!

Great way to end it. I wanted to say that dialog is the more intricate piece in writing to make it sound natural. Dialog needs to ebb and flow as we speak, but capturing that as a writer is difficult. Your dialog flow reads natural - kudos!

Looking forward to reading more from you!

Not going to lie; I half-expected him to take that cum-and-butter mixture leaking out of her bottom and spread it on a piece of toast for her, to really lean in to his "chef for the day" role. Haha. But I think it's probably for the better that things remain sweet between the two characters, rather than overly perverted. Their emotional connection is adorable and that's what really makes the stories pop the most for me! Keep at it, darlin'!