All Comments on 'A Pleasure to Serve Pt. 01'

Great beginning. I can’t wait for the next chapter.

This seems like it's going to be a great new series, but what happened to the Vox Dominus series?

The only think i would suggest is more detail. But that is just my personal view. Well written.

I will enjoy seeing how this proceeds. I think I have an inkling of the new plan.

Strong voice and character identity, and the fun is not spoiled by seeing Poe's perspective. Even if he comes in later in the story, this first chapter from the girls eyes only is alluringly mysterious.

nicely written can't wait for chapter 2.

Looking forward to Ch. 2

Any chance of a chapter 2? This is an enjoyable read

Fine story, which certainly deserves at least a new chapter for each of the other sisters and a finale with the whole harem serving as his maids!