All Comments on 'A Sparrow Alights'
by BuckRivers
- 13 Comments
Aargh !! What are you doing ?? You seriously mean they're never going to meet up again; I've got steam coming out my ears and they're never going to meet again ??
Please, you've gotta fix this.... wait, maybe you have , going back to your story list to check...
"No, you cannot keep a sparrow. You can only hope that as they fly away, they take a little bit of you with them."
A beautifully written story!!! One of the very best.
Hi all,
Thanks for your feedback on this story, and I'm glad you enjoyed it, even if it caused steaming (heh-heh).
Checked off that box. Now back to the hum-drum daily routine--but, oh the memories!
I thoroughly enjoyed this story from beginning to end.
.. and that is what made it an exceptional read for me. Thankyou!
Hello Buck,
I greatly enjoyed reading your story, very much so that it's made me wonder about my own online encounters in chatrooms.
Perhaps I shall find a like-minded person to engage in erotic fiction and share this story with them. =]
This story is the one that hooked me on erotica, both reading and dabbling in writing for myself. I'm not shy about telling people to read it, it's just that good. Someday, I hope I'll have such an encounter, but I know one night would never be enough for me.
Thanks for the shivers, the warmth, and for helping me to awaken desires I never knew I had. Now... where did I leave my pen? Heh heh.
Interesting premise.
Lots of imagined sex.
But each incident was too automatic.
The same is true of the 'actual' sex.
Four stars.
Beautifully sensual. Would love to know if it could be/would be possible, an actuality happening to me? IMAGINE, there is a woman out there IMAGINING to be with me! Freely wanting to be with me, wanting to please each other. IMAGINE
Love this'un. I'm all for them exploring some more since it seems they're a perfect pair - and the mates they have now are perfect duds.