by Giveandgetoral
I liked your story, please keep writing this story. I would like to read more about the rape in more detail. I think that it would make it easier to understand how she got to where she is now.
Donny759
I loved the tenderness of the story, well written. Please write more. Thanks Debbie.xxx.
well written, good story. open ending. its just begging for a sequel or a full series even. id love to see it get to the point where theyre acting almost like theyre married. (maybe a baby in the future)
I find it so hot to read about a father's cock pushing into his daughter for the very first time, so slowly and so lovingly.
Again you have moved me and only hope at some point you bring us more chapters for these hot reads/ ty
So nice that they had the means to help each other recovery from there abusive past; hers from the rape and his from neglect. Mom apparently wanted a Neanderthal who would control her instead of want to be with & please her. I hope she ended up with drug lord who slaves her out to his dozens of cronies!
To the Anon who wanted more details from the rape; "shame on you" this isn't the BDSM or Non-Consent / Reluctance category. We got enough info for us to know that it was traumatic; anything else was unnecessary.
I seem to remember that it was stated that she couldn't have children due to the damage from the beating; but I have heard of bodies healing themselves where it has happened anyway. So; in my mind, I see them with a l-o-n-g loving life together - with children. Thank god she didn't turn out like Mom, argh!!!
Thanks for the enjoyable read;
DKP
Very enjoyable read and not like a rape at all. They were truly making love not the other.
Ok, havent read the whole story yet, but already have a comment! (Hey, with my shitty memory I might forget by the time i finish reading it!;) ill post a real comment in a bit. (Wish we could edit our comments, wouldnt thst be handy?)
So, I know the mom is written like she is to move the plot forward and get her out of the picture (and at the same time not have to worry about dad knocking her up, hidden bonus!), but daaaaaaamn! What kind of sick bitch bails on her only child because shes incapable of having kids?! You just want to string the hoe up! If she wants grandkids that bad tell the bitch to spread her legs and hatch out another daughter, spend another 18 years raising her then hope she wants kids and doesnt decide that her family is so fucked up she would rather not polute the genepool!
This was truly a love story filled with such tenderness. It was both romantic and erotic. I loved it.
You had me by the balls from the opening paragraph: "...brutally beaten, raped repeatedly." But this was not a tale of unlimited use and abuse. It was much more - a sumptuous, delicious banquet of feasting on incestual, self-sacrificing love! Well done.
This was a very emotional story and caused me to break down. I've spent years in therapy from being gang raped
To show her truly what making loves all about. They need to continue and have her overcome what happened to her. Also Daddy needs to continue to show her his love and complete devotion to her.
Absolutely loved the story, except . . . Would like to have the repasts to suffer a lot more than simply being shot. Something along the line of having their balls cut off a stuffed down their throats or other such tender mercies. Very nice piece of work, though,