All Comments on 'Airport Search Ch. 3'

gimme a break! obviously you live in the unreal world. there is no way a woman could perfom like that except in a man's fantasy. and please take a class in english grammer. spell check is a handy tool as well. you show promise but edit your work and get a hold on reality just a tad to make your stories believable.

It's what it is suppossed to be a Fantasy, maybe a dark fantasy, but a fantasy none the less. You need to get a ptoogreader or editor, dude.

You are the absolute master of erotic literature. I would love to do all these things to a young beautiful girl.

So, I have to wonder -- where did the first 2 chapters get to? You're referring to earlier incidents that are not/no longer posted. Please fix -- very curious!

I have been a fan of your writing for years and have read every thing of it I could find. This did NOT disappoint me. WOW! But, where are chapter's 1 & 2? By the way, are there anymore "Joanna" stories? I've found #1 & #2 the sequal.

Good vivid story, but why start on chapter 3? First thing I felt I'm missing the preamble to what I was reading. There wasn't any mention in your intro, so wassup wit dat?

Where's airport search ch. 1 and 2?

I am loving both, the humiliation and sexual degradation she is going though, but also the pain, as both of those things turn me on and make me wet more than anything else ever has. I am picturing myself being her, having those things done to me just as they are being done to her.

Wet, hott, horny...and loving it.

catt...(Tom's sub/slut in training, 'shared' bi wife)

I'm loving this story, but I want to read the first two chapters. Where are they, please???

Where's the earlier part of the story? Where she comes to Cuba?