All Comments on 'Alexa's Tales: While Mom's Away...'

Your stories are what made me a full timer on literotica. I love all of them but can you write a few more bbw stories? Few writers capture the moment the way you do. Thank you for all your stories over the years.

I enjoyed your story and particularly liked the female character NOT being a typical vision of beauty. Her curves made her more realistic.

A good story has a setup, transition, and a payoff. I liked the setup and the payoff, but the transition, imo, could have been better. There was no sexual tension and for me, that is what makes a story erotic. I would have liked a seduction and the lady giving in to the temptation of sex with her mother's partner.

Just my opinion and I hope it helps with your future output.

Dom.

Great story..Had to stroke while reading it But wanna hear more and how he fucked her and impregnated her..