All Comments on 'Alice's Wonderland: Be a Good Girl'

Better and better

My feedback for all parts.

I really like the idea. The build up is good and it makes sense in itself. Some more of him being needy due to sexual frustration would be nice. Hope this story continues for some more parts.

A suggestion. Please mark this storyline as a series. Then we will receive a link for the next part at the end. At the moment we have to search for the next part by date of upload. I normally wouldn't bother as I think when there is no link to the next part, the author didn't write the next part. You could loose some potential readers for to this.

Thanks for sharing and thanks for the entertainment.

you had me confused for a few minutes there! I actually had made a story series for Alice's Wonderland and updated it every chapter upload... turns out i hadn't published it as a series yet... whoops! That should be sorted now! Thanks for bringing it to my attention!