by st0rmbringer
I enjoyed this one! I know you write often and have multiple ideas rolling around in your head, but take your time. I feel like parts of this were rushed through. This could have been spread out over multiple chapters, but I understand you wanting to kind of wrap it up and keep things moving. I love the idea of introducing new characters, but I think I would have liked the story way more had you broken it up into a few more chapters. Overall, nicely done! I look forward to the next one!
Your stories are always excellent, however this time you have exceeded yourself this was just brilliant.
Such an incredibly hot subject, old black man and a young white girl just fabulous, please please write more.