- Loving Wives
- Anna Ch. 11
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All Comments on 'Anna Ch. 11'
by johnthepostman
- 17 Comments
The series was great and deserved a better ending.
Not at all....
So, the protagonist had had a son that he never know about?!?!? And it was OK with it?!?!? What a pure bullshit....
room. This woman is a pathetic user. She fucked around with him then abandoned him. She lost her husband and could have gone back to him. She had his child and did not tell him or let him know until the child had died. Then she appears out of nowhere and informs him that his child by her is dead. What kind of cruel, vindictive, mentally ill bitch is this? You cant love trash like this, she is one of the creatures the world would be better without.
Actually, the ending made it real for me especially the last two chapters. I had an affair with a married woman for 3 years. I took her for granted, I took her feelings for granted, and she was the best I have ever had... one day, I her; she ended it. She said she wanted to be free divorced her husband and dumped me. Do I think she is mental?... a little but I think we all are a little crazy. But this story really hit home for me.
I hope that the "writer" wold stop spewing this mindless excrement !!
Nicely told series with the ups and downs of a real affair.
I felt like I knew these characters! I really enjoyed the story all but the end!
Why did you feel the need to keep them apart? I don't like the feeling I have right now as I'm kind of anxious about what could of and should have been.
Did he solve the mystery of the cheating... no.
Did he ever get back with Jane, even though she did the same to him... no.
Did he have any remorse about screwing a recent widow.... no.
Did Anna say she wanted another child with him... no.
Does he have any integrity whatsoever when it comes to women... no.
Should we care about his emotions since all he does is screw... no.
Would I read chapter 12.... no.
Seduction, lust, chemistry, pettiness and humor will have to do. This was a true wistful, sinful, sweet read. Thank you.
First thing first , it's the first time for me writting a comment for a story . Read a lot but never did.
So why I'm doing it now ? Well because I'm a bit pissed by the ending . I... love happy ending but I'm fine if a story end in a not-happy way. Here it's not like that , it's really sad , Anna and John don't end up together, okay that I can deal with it , but their daughter's part, it's too much for me . That wasn't needed at all , them not ending together was enough .
Something that I can't get out of my mind is: why John never was honest about how he felt for Anna back then ?
I thought the story was pretty well written. Other than the authors annoying mistake of using complement for compliment, his writing skills were good. I honestly felt like there would be a reconciliation after she shared the memory of her dead child. I also felt like John should have pursued her.
Part of this I felt was close to me. I loved an older married woman. She was a family friend and had a daughter. During a hiatus of about 8 years the daughter left her and went somewhere. I reunited with her as a real estate agent. I seduced her when I closed on a condo and continued the relationship even after I moved away. She remarried once during our time and I moved back, and she moved to another town. The last time I saw her I refused to invite her to visit inside my home. She later told me over the phone she moved again to be near her daughter and was diagnosed with a terminal palsy. I never saw her but talked a few times. She may have called but could not speak. I recieved a call from her number; it was her husband. He realized she had called me even though she was married to him. He was upset and I listened while he ranted and hung up. I felt he lost her twice.
Hi
I read all the chapters and think it was a nice and sexy story even if the ending was sad.
Thank you very much, please write more stories.