All Comments on 'Appreciate Good Teachers'
by rio_
- 24 Comments
That was sooooooooo erotic - so sweet written !!! YOU GOT IT !!!! Write more often - every day !!! Pleaseeeeeeeeeeee !!!!!
Elena f27 from Greece ()
I was so turned on and my pussy was so wet I couldn't help but to touch it, and as soon as I did I had a luscious orgasm. I agree you are very talented as an author. Please write more, and often. I can't wait for my husband to get home I'm going to fuck his brains out thinking about this story.
Great build up, adding to the intense sexuality. Very well written and paced.
Great first story! My wife and I read it together and had to stop a little while to take care of some urgent business. Looking forward to reading more stories, and my shared wife is now asking me about the next time she can relax!
What an exquisite story. So often, the MMF or MFM stories left here have raw, lusty sex. Seldom, however, do you find the tenderness that your story possessed. Don't stop with this beautiful and emotional piece. Keep writing. Ray
great descriptions and lovely detail - my favorite kind. I was disapointed that this was the only one you have written - more please!
I really love your story! I got so wet reading it and can't wait for the next one, Please write more soon. Thanks
Annie - Chicago
Loved this sweet story. I hope we will be treated to more of your excellent writing. Thanx.
Just self serving idiotic stroke prattle ! One of the worst !!
Great story! Great build up and emotion in it. Very visual - I felt as if I was in it. Please write again!!!
...great writing developing Mia's hot desire, so please write some stories about Mia's secret summer vacation as the poolside erotic masseuse on a cruise ship trip for nudist African swingers..Mia is popular and averages 18 half hour "session" per day..she loves the huge horse size hung basketball players..and she is live on 800 screens on the ship 24/7..what fun and lot's of material for future "massage" stories..Looking forward to more of your enjoyable stories,,,,,,,,,:::::::
Thank you everyone for commenting on my story - seeing the positive feedback will encourage more writing. I've been busy and haven't submitted anything else (yet) but I do plan on adding more.
For anyone else, please leave a note if you liked the story (both for mine and any other entry). We authors really appreciate the kind words!
Rio...as many have said before me, you've captured the details throughout that let us BE there in the story. And from a personal perspective, I really like that you've kept the goodness of the relationship in the story instead of going through degradation, dominance, and a host of other negative things. Looking forward to your next one.
The very idea that a respectable teacher could ever... could ever... I mean... well... WOW! That was hot!
This is probably the best threesome story on this site that I have ever read. I am not sure if this is real or not but the detail, pace and description of the events were perfect. Thank you very much for posting this and I hope to see you write again, Rio.
LOVING WIVES is a play on words ding bat!!!! You must retarded or a fool or both!!! And none of us gives a rat's ass about you sad pathetic love life or marriage. Just leave the writers alone and rad the romance section if you can't stand the LW. What a sad little man you must be. Put yo9ur head back into the booze and fucking die you annoying pos!!.