All Comments on 'Ashley's Temptations Pt. 02'

Daphne123 you are the queen of the "hot short story"!!! In ALL your submissions you manage to pack in more in one page than most people can in five, and you still have believable characters, great dialogue, and hot scenes. Keep writing!!!!!

Awww so sweet. Thank you. I don't think I have the attention span to write a good five pager. :) I just try to make my short ones as sexy and fun as possible. xoxo Daphne123

You had me already with the pigtails and bows. Such a cute girl hiding the hot teenager underneath. Then, you played the "daddy" card and won the hand right there. You are hitting every one of my kinks ... student/Teacher, little girl/Daddy, with a little bit of spanking & discipline to spice it up. I hope you'll continue those kinks and add more. Thank you!