- Sci-Fi & Fantasy
- Astra Pt. 03
- Page 15
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Click hereJack nodded, "I will contact Tera-4 to pick up that pilot. I should be allowed to spend some time walking them through 5x flying before the big day. I will use 2 weeks to get them ready to devastate. The call signs for this are Lancer-1 and Lancer-2. My scout is TAR-2. I will not register the fighters. No IDs as they are bogies."
President Grendal nodded and looked at Jack, "How bad is the range going to be?"
Jack laughed, "Be sure there is no personnel on it and be ready to replace all the hardware on it. 8,000 rounds of rail gun ammo will not leave much left, let alone the lasers. They will stop firing and bug out once you hit the armor or I recall them. Admiral, what do you drink? Same for you General?"
Admiral Stiller looked up, "Blue Star Whiskey."
The General looked at Jack, "I will drink the same."
Jack looked at them "Two cases of Blue Star Whiskey against two cases of Irish Mills True Mead. One case for each challenger for your particular challenge."
They both nodded their agreement. Jack ended the call and nodded, "Let the games begin."
- COMMENTS
Really am enjoying this and appreciate your work and situation and just have to say how much fun of a story this is! I read plenty of stories on here with grammatical errors, name changes, and all kinds of issues. Unless it makes it unreadable I could care less as I can still deeply enjoy the story and picture you and anyone else is painting. Yes I get confused or turned around on who is actually saying what to whom sometimes or where certain things happened or come in, but again it doesn’t take away from my enjoyment of a really unique and fun story to read. Thank you and keep up the good work!
Thank you for your comment. As you read the series, which I hope you do you will discover where 'John' comes into play. You are correct there were three instances of it this section of the story that were misplaced and not caught in my editing. I will resubmit that section to correct those. I enjoyed your comment because it listed an issue I could easily fix. Thank you.
While enjoying the story, I have noticed that the plot development of the story seems to be proceeding on Jack's 5X engine technology speeds, LOL. Super Fast.
It seems that if this is a therapy for you, it is working just fine. While there are a few grammatical errors here and there, they in NO WAY detract from MY enjoyment of the story. Especially since you announce that fact very plainly. ( An example would be where you have "Jack" taking an action, yet have "John" doing it in the story. That is not a complaint, just an example of a noted error.)
KEEP UP THE GOOD STUFF and keep us entertained.
really enjoy the story and love the characters have their own style and feel.
Sometimes I find your wording and grammar to be a little weird but I find myself really enjoying this series so far and am excited for more to come.