All Comments on 'Big Butt Chronicles Ch. 02: Latisha'

I wonder how this will play out

Make more stories please. There's like two authors who make thick women with fat asses erotica. Great story love the build up. Do more Crack Addict with that Jewish chick you've got me obsessed with a Jewish thickie.

Nice cliff hanger.

Big Butt Chronicles: Yvette is part one of this series- I forgot to put a chapter number on that installment and it leaves me with a sequel that is read before the first chapter.

This is going good I like it! Now, where is the rest?!

I'd like to start by saying that I'm usually a big fan of your work.

This story was decent (not your best work) up to the point on the bus, after that the story went WAY down hill. It dragged out, had pointless plot points and ultimately came to a very disappointing ending. I would say this needs a heavy re-write + conclusion (no 2nd chapter needed).

Lets put thing in perspective: Big Butt Chronicles: Yvette is the first story in this series. It was numbered incorrectly when the site cleared it to be posted.

BTW, my computer containing the rest of this story crashed.

Is there going to be a continuation of this ??

What a cliffhanger lol. Great!