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Click hereI lay still panting as his grip relaxed.
"See," he chuckled in my ear, "it's better when you don't rush it."
I had to completely agree with him and as it was to turn out, that was a feat.
- COMMENTS
"It's very rare for one of you to take the option of death."
They don't murder people, those just "take the option of death". Nice euphemism there. It's fascinating how humans in stories like these tend to just shrug off the fact that werewolves are murderers.
Do love the story!! Even with the out of this world sex, and total feeling of belonging and being at home while curled up with X, I still think I would probably give it up and walk away if it meant giving up the freedom to go where I want, any time I want, without having to check in or get permission, or guards, first. :/
That'd be like being a kid living with my parents all over again, just with sex thrown in, lol.
Some would like that though... Even then that's a lot of trust in the person you are submitting to, and a lot of faith that they won't change.
I liked the back-clawing orgasms part. Happened to me a few times, I'll never forget it. Boy was she embarrassed in the morning when she saw her claw marks on my back. I thought it was funny and made her do it again.
I understand Elizabeth's lack of patience...poor girl may have been a virgin when she slept with Joel but as a doctor, she knew all about premature ejaculation. We gotta get it while the gettin' good.
May I just congratulate your clever use of names... I finally thought to look up the meaning of "latro," and it's hunter (or mercenary or robber, but hunter is most fitting). I love it when authors choose names with relevant meanings!!!!!! :D
The lemons could be more expensive. Her giving him oral, more positions and anal come into mind. Also her having sex with the full wolf, so hot. Apart from that, like the story
"liked seeing her argue with him" lol yeah sure ok ... had to go back and read it again to see the couple of lines where she screams , he ignores her and then "lets" her do a little bit. Rest of its still her being pretty pathetic and him making the rules. Id say up to the late 60s in America some men treated their wives exactly like this. "the little woman" stays home and does the laundry , lol that's of course when he allows her to wash. I think the main problem I have with him is he shows her no respect. And no , not killing her or smacking her around isn't respect. His threats are implied, she will have freedom 1 or 2 % of what she had before , and only on his terms. He is the master and she the slave.
And no this isn't bad criticism I think Its some awesome writing. The very fact that Joel annoys the crap out of me proves that its good. If it was bad I wouldn't even care.
There really so much to say about your series. To begin with, I adore your writing style. I'm crazy about the plot, characters, dialogue. You're the first truly great writer I've seen on this site. Just a wonderful story.