All Comments on 'Building a Better Jessica Ch. 04'
by DeeperDown
- 12 Comments
Loved it.. showing some great potential here!
Please keep it going!
Waiting anxiously for #5. Maybe she could get an implant that can be remote controlled to make her orgasm instantly?
OMG I want to be Jessica. Please please continue it definitly is a keeper.......
Oh my god, don't stop now! This transformation story is so hot! I want to read the final results! I hope she ends up back with her boyfriend, but I can also see her sold to a high end brothel. What I don't want to see is her sold to a single man other than her boyfriend.
this is great so far, can't wait to see where you take it.
Please don't let this end here. You have created such a wonderful beginning, and have an obvious talent for drawing the reader into the story. I hope to read many more chapters.
I like where this story's going. The idea of a transformed Jessica being continually exposed to porn, bound and horny as hell is delightful. I haven't read the next chapter, but I truly hope that the hole in her seat is made for a powerful piston-dildo that is going to fuck her out of her mind. (assuming she is actually allowed an orgasm, it should be unrelenting and mechanical------frankly, I'd keep her desperate and stimulated for a few days or weeks more, until her entire being is dedicated beyond all reason to having a climax----get her to agree to the most degrading acts imaginable in an exchange) ....but that's where I'd go with it, so I look forward to seeing Chapter 5.
Well, at least she is getting an IV to help with her staying hydrated. I still wonder when they are going to feed her. I do hope that although this story has been around a little over ten years that she is able to go back to her old life instead of ending up as a sex-crazed bimbo being loaned out by some master. She could even end up really giving her husband a real thrill with her new found functions as a slut and maybe he will loan her out. We may even find out that he was the one that may buy her later.