All Comments on 'C.N.A. Story Ch. 05'
by bluefox07
- 4 Comments
Great story, bluefox. The writing was good with believable dialog and the sex scenes were hot. The scenes from his work weren't overdone yet they conveyed the grimness of his job. Not much plot but then again, I didn't expect much given the Erotic Couplings category. I appreciated the younger man/older lady love story and how the good sex they shared blossomed into something more.
My thanks for an enjoyable read.
WHERE ARE CHAPTERS 6 THRU ????? PLEASE, GIVE US MORE..
PRETTY REAL AS THERE ARE TWO C.N.A.'S IN OUR FAMILY.
HOWEVER, THEY ARE NOT QUITE AS ACTIVE..( I THINK! )
We have to know if Linda ditches the boyfriend and moves in with him and gets pregnant from their last lovemaking session.
This is obviously a romantic story above all else, and would have been better placed in the Romance category. Well-written, this story has plenty of plot mixed with love scenes that are much too short. This story should have been longer; a joy to read.