All Comments on 'Caleb 48 - Eleanor'

Nice intrigue in this one anxious to see how you will develop this new storyline for Caleb and Co!

Looks like trouble is starting again with the Eversons. I hope they just take them to a deserted island and drop them off to play Gillian’s Island.

Oh boy the spit hit the spam lol...it simply amazing how this story line flows...so fluid and seemless..I think Eleanor has set cap cap much like Ness did

..but who knows...no one but PM lol. Thank you for the fix I am a truly addicted

Thank you for this great series. I think "the protection " will be more hindrance than help. Either way, I look forward to finding out.

CALEB!!! RUN!!! This Gonzales Protection seems to be about as dangerous as the Everson Binding!!! Get rid of it, ASAP!!! Think about it!! A family line, in Europe, with Compulsion, that was NEVER bound by the Eversons?? And, NOBODY KNEW?? Put that 'Protection' in a power ball and toss it somewhere it can not touch you again!!!

Great story. It is very interesting seeing how other prominent family lines from other countries regard the everson-stott dealing. I am not sure that Caleb getting that protection was a good thing. Curios to see how he will be able to handle other power users using power on him especially his girls who use it to help them all sleep. Can not wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work.

I keep leaving comments - it is getting old but I love the storyline and where you are taking it - can’t wait for the next one - Thanks again for all the effort

The story just keeps on getting better and better. please keep it going

This is so much more than a simple "mind control" story. Bravo! I check each day to see if the next chapter is published yet. Please keep up your excellent work. Mark.

Love these stories. The imagination and intrigue are keeping me reading. Please keep doing what you are doing.

Now, you can't leave us hanging here for very long. Please send the next chapter soon. Awesome story. As good as anything I have ever read!

Read from beginning love the story always waiting for the next chapter

Publish this as a book when compete! It fantastic!

Great chapter. We've had much small stories within the larger arc, well we're getting thaf larger arc.

I also enjoy the reference to the memory he couldn't quite remember.

Another great one!

Since they have a little empathy will Jules and Ness now share?

I really love the way the story evolves. Although in the beginning, it was fun to read about sex, forme there is no need for the explicit details on sexual encountersanymore.

The abbreviations of the powers in Spain could be explained. Tk is telekinesis, but the others, no idea. Maybe add them in the cast list.

So very good to see the continued development of this story. I love it. I check back every other day and it is always a highlight when there is a new chapter. Thank you

Just a quick one to help: TK is Telekinesis - the ability to move objects. CK is Cryokinesis - ability to create and control Ice and cold. PK is Pyrokinesis - the ability to control heat and flame.

Great story

Isn't that second secret the illusion alert?

The story of healing Eleanor and the meeting with the ancient avatar is really impressive. Nice work!

just an awesome story. I check everyday to see if a new chapter is there.

Another excellent twist to the unfolding story. I really love how you have branched out across the globe to include other family lines, it really makes this story a work of art.

When you introduced the vacation chapters I was getting worried you may be running out of steam, but this chapter was much better than I anticipated. I expected a wind down with the vacation story, which I figured was just going to be a little bit of a, catch your breath, have some fun, and some wild European sex romps. That may have been true of the first two vacation chapters, but the way you finished the vacation with this chapter was brilliant.

I love the new story lines you have introduced, the Everson systematic breeding out of the Stott line, which by the way makes for a great reason for Caleb to have his little harem (now it all makes sense), The Gonzales family line and possible future tie in for a Stott/Gonzales baby, and the Emerson’s finally being brought to task by the European families were all genius. I was expecting a bunch of filler story, and you ramp up a ton of new drama to write about, I’m speechless.

I can’t wait to see how all of this drama you just set up starts to unfold, when the clan gets back to America.

Thank you so much for surprising me, and keep the story rolling. KS

I've re-read most of your Caleb chapters and they're great. I know you have another 5 or so chapters on a pay site, I'm hoping you'll post them here for cheapskates like me!

Great story. I’ve really enjoyed the episodes. I must say that I’ve never read 48 episodes os a literotica story before this. Good work.

I am so enjoying this story! And rather than winding down, it only seems to be picking up stream. Nicely done. What I like about it is the fascinating exploration of what it would be like to live in a world with exceptional mental powers, including the ethical struggles, but also the intimate interpersonal issues and interactions. I wish I knew what this “others site” was and how to access more by this author.

Another great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens when they get back to US, and also when they come back to Spain again. I'm surprised Caleb and Maria didn't get together :)

Ah, thanks Anonymous down in the comments explaining what is CK and PK, it bugged me so much!

Now you have to continue until we see Celeb and Eleanor's baby. That kid should be formidable indeed.

The plot gets deeper and deeper. I am getting more and more interested with each story.

I love the way you bring new threads into the story without diluting the central one. You have a very rich future in fiction!

Thanks for the chapter!

Love it!