All Comments on 'California Dreaming'

Hot story! The realism of this situation and the naivety of this young man experiencing gay sex for the first time was as much of a turn on as the hot sex itself. Well done!

I like it. The story was erotic, but if you spent a little more time describing the feeling of a hard dick entering his tight virgin asshole it would have been more complete. Don't get me wrong, but instead of having him lie on his belly maybe have him get up on his hands a knees. You could have him describe the cold lube smeared on his ass and his toes curling as the hard cock enters him. How he hears grunting as his tight ass loosens around the cock sliding in and out. Just a thought.