- Erotic Horror
- CarousHell
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Click hereHe pulled back to the tip, just letting her abused pussy lips close around it like a kiss. He pushed forward, only an inch. She murmured something, he slid back again, teasing her. As he moved forward, deeper this time, she exhaled deeply. He pushed, she sighed, and tried to move him deeper. He pulled back, she made a sound of disappointment.
Bit by bit he moved into her. She panted in tiny breaths, begging for more. He knew she was ready. He started slowly, eventually giving her his full length.
The last of Jolene slipped away as the black's huge cock slid in and out of her now dripping cunt. She was no more than a fuck toy, and wanted it that way. She felt a climax build and pass. He picked up the tempo. Another took her. He went faster. She met him thrust for thrust. Another. She slammed his length into herself, her hands gripping the pole for support. She grimaced, her body tensed. His cock pounded her. She threw back her head, a torrent of sounds raged from her. He thrust harder, faster. She froze, a long guttural sound welled up from deep within her, peaking to a scream of pure primal release. Her body rocked as she came, impaling herself on his hardness. It rolled on and on. His powerful thrusts resumed, drawing it out.
Her noises were now unintelligble, animalistic. She moved from one blinding climax to the next. His cock swelled, he was getting ready to join her. Her hips were a blur as she tried to meet his pounding. Her pussy was swollen almost inside out, and still she wanted more. He snorted loudly, growing closer, fucking her even harder. He froze, and unloaded inside her. Moments later the overflow spilled from her overworked cunt. She kept moving, screaming as she came one more time.
The Carousel was slowing. The lights faded, the sounds and music stopped. The horses were returning to normal. She was in a sticky pool of drying sex. Her pussy was raw.
The Carousel stopped The crowd was gone. Daylight was beginning to show on the horizon.
She went to step off the ride, but the pole through her back held her in place. She watched in horror as her arms turned to forelegs, her body stiffening, becoming immobile. She felt a playful nip on her ass just before it too, turned into painted plaster. Her mind stayed aware, knowing night would come again. And again, and again.
- COMMENTS
Wow!! Amazingly hot story. I could only make it as far as the point Jolene finally reached her first, cataclysmic orgasm. I was edging along with her as she was being edged and when she exploded, I exploded. My body let go so intensely that I came more convulsively than I have ever have in my life. I was asleep almost before my climax finished and slept for several hours afterward. The visual that your wonderful story painted was the most erotic image my mind's eye has ever seen. No question, this story will join my must-reads for those times when I'm desiring to self-pleasure. Thanks so much for the wonderful tale!
You used excellent imagery in describing the carousel--I could visualize it as I read.
The images of Jolene's physical and emotional collapse seemed realistic.
BelleJ2009
I don't think Jolene deserved anything she got, but there is something about this story that keeps me coming back, again and again. My favorite literotica story. Thank you.
I came twice... what better compliment could there be to a piece of erotica delectably written xD
Is that even a word. I know for really good music, you say it has infinite replay value. What about a story that you can go back to year after year after year and still get a huge charge from it? Re-readability? I don't know what you call it, but this story has it. Great. I've been dumpster diving for great erotic horror stories, but time and time again I have to go back to the great ones because they are so few and far in between.
I loved it, very different and reminiscent of a twilight zone story.
This along with 'hunted' are the two best stories on this site.
This would be a great submission for Year's Best Fantasy and Horror. Very well written, I was thoroughly drawn in and had goosebumps throughout. I don't think they take stories with this much sex but it is a thought and definitely meant as a compliment to your writing and the story.
This may be the best erotic story I have ever read! (and I read a LOT!)
Impressive... just the right amount of scary and hot, mixed up into one. Fantastic! Thank you :)
That was, as titled in this comment, surreal and beautiful. I'm going to get shivers the next time I go to a carnival, methinks...