- First Time
- Casual Nudity
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by Ashson
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Unprotected sex may result in babies (baby) even first time! ;-)
I would agree with barepusslover. It was a little bit disrespectful for Mark to casually come inside a virgin without using protection. She's probably not on birth control, and he's probably not snipped. She was definitely not expecting to have a bare cock thrust inside of her. It might be worthwhile for your experienced males to also be responsible. If it wasn't her first time, and sex was likely expected, I would write in both of them having condoms available.
The relationship between the main character and Mark feels unrealistic, strange and gross. Supposedly Mark has never made any sexual advances toward the main character, hence her shock when he touches her and her subsequent recoiling and embarrassment. And yet instead of being disgusted toward the man who just made nonconsensual sexual advances towards her, shes agrees to go out with him? The relationship between them is at best, manipulative. Mark is clearly taking advantage of someone muvh younger than him, this isn't sexy or romantic. And if you want to write a noncon story then that's fine, but this is under "first time", as if losing your virginity to a creepy "uncle" is somehow normal. Not to mention, the passage,
"Currently closed as tight as a clam afraid of an octopus. If you'd ever had a serious boyfriend then the way you're dressed, with a man in the room, it would be relaxed and flowering, hoping to be touched."
Is one of the cringiest things I've ever read. Was this meant to be sexy? It's extremely creepy and gross given the circumstances, ans I can't think of many circumstances in which it would be sexy.
The premise wasn't all bad, casual nudity is hot, but this story is just gross and doesn't make sense.
It reminds me of a lot of wonderful sex i had with a friend of my dads who was similar age as him. I had a crush on him but ended up losing my V in the back seat of a car after a disco not the best sex but excited at doing it. Anyway i still wanted fucked by my dads friend and accidently on purpose made sure one day he was in our house see me naked. I knew going to the bathroom he had to pass my bedroom so when he went i stripped left my door open and bent over as if i was looking for something in a drawer. I heard him flush and come out and when i was sure he had seen me stood up turned around and he was staring at me. I walked to the door and whispered to him if you like what you see you can have it and gave him my number on a piece of paper. He looked confused but smiled and left. Next day he text me and after quite a bit of back and fro admitted he would love to fuck me as long as nobody found out which i agreed was a good idea. We met at his next day and i wasnt dissapointed the sex was amazing and his dick was very nice thicker than any id had so far. We had sex every chance we got and he was the first guy to cum in my mouth and the only one so far iv had anal sex with. I got hooked on outdoor sex thanks to him and love the thrill and risk of being seen having sex. I was already on contraception Depo and he loved cumming in me and i liked it too. Even when i have sex with other guys i compare them to him and not many have been as good as him. Its been over a year since iv seen him as he moved but we still stay in touch and hopefully soon i will be on a trip near where he lives so i intend meeting and getting some of what iv been missing. Maybe meeting some of his friends who knows what may happen then. Thanks from Lucy xo