All Comments on 'Catalysts'
by tomlitilia
- 22 Comments
My SO wants to be dominated and I had no idea were to start.
... impossibly high. Wish my neighbor were similarly open, kinky and playful.
This story was the opposite of scary, very strong and mellow. A catalyst would remain unchanged after the chemical reaction. I doubt that any of the participants will be unchanged. Great story and pace.
any other story can compete with this winner...Halloween or not. Superior in all that matters. Bravo!
What a turn on in must be for someone in a position of authority to debase themselves, and give themselves over to their most carnal desires. Very hot! I loved it.
Very well done, believable, relatable and so very very sexy.
Tess (UK)
This is a great piece. Really hot, but also well written. The scene is set well, and there's a good gradual build up without it feeling drawn out. Really arousing. I enjoyed a little play to myself while reading ;)
I haven't read all of these stories but this is my favorite so far. I thought the build up seemed extremely slow but in the end it really added to the story in many different ways and at the end being invited back in 2 weeks made for the perfect ending. Great writing and a greatly executed story 5 stars all day long.
I noticed this story in a "Similar Stories" ending sidebar and was attracted by the very high 4.80 rating. But when I realized it is BDSM (a category I avoid), I hesitated, but finally tried it. Once started, I was sucked in, and it had me riveted all the way to the end.
Normally do not relate to dom-sub, but admit it worked for this story.
Spanking I do not get, either giving or receiving..
But the plot was so great, and carried out so skillfully, including portraying the quandries of the narrator and of Kristin, I cheerfully award 5 stars.
I agree with the analysis by thesebreasts95.
Stories like this, leave me in admiration that some human being can conceive such a creative plot, and so skillfully carry out the presentation of that plot.
A scene came to mind of those 3 buddies several years after college, getting together to reminisce. It is not hard to imagine this episode being the highlight of their college days, and them still shaking their heads in wonder.
Paul in Oklahoma
Always great to read another Tomlitilia story. You create such a wide range of plots but they all are damn right sexy. L O R
Rarely enjoy the degrading humiliation that seems to be common in the BDSM genre but this was outstanding in making it part of the sex and enjoyable all around (the world, as that is one of the best 3somes I've read!).
One of the best. Sensual, submissive and real, unlike some over the top submissive stories I read here.
Hope you will never stop writing such gems.
Sapna
Outstanding story. I love that you were able to write it so that it was respectful, but the dominant/submissive aspect still remained.
Very hot
Excellently written. The tempo is just right. I agree with blacklceo1. Thank you for taking the time to write.
Wish there was a sequel to this one... One of your brilliant stories.
One of the very best stories I've read on this site. You've taken a completely unique and exciting premise, added characters who are believable and plotted it out perfectly. And, it's all highly erotic. I can't believe I haven't noticed this before now -- five stars (or more, if that were allowed)!