- Incest/Taboo
- C'est Mom
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All Comments on 'C'est Mom'
by wajawhiii
- 14 Comments
I gave you a 5 because of your excellent descriptions. "I stood up in front of her, paused for effect and slowly lowered my shorts and briefs together. I exposed my PUBIC hair" (should always be included in your male description) "and continued to push my clothing down. The elastic of my briefs dragged my erection down with it and, when their position exceeded the length of my erection, it released, SPRUNG UP FORCEFULLY and bounced (reality is, this is exactly what should happen, and this sounds very believable) "happily in front of her."
I hooked my thumbs into the waistband of her bikini panties and began to pull them down SLOWLY (slowly to preserve the moment is perfect, it's exactly what is supposed to happen. Very good description). I didn't want to shock her with the sudden removal I preferred and I thought a slow approach would intensify the eroticism of the moment (100% correct). "About an inch down, I revealed the edge of her PUBIC HAIR" (This was one of the biggest factor in me giving you a rating of 5. Your inclusion of MOM'S PUBIC HAIR. Moms are supposed to be hairy down there and so are mothers-in-law. "It was the same color as her head hair (Perfect description and exactly as it should be) "and neatly trimmed to avoid exposure above the top of her panties." Trimmed is fine and many pussies when done correctly, look great. However, descriptions of extremely thick and very hairy mounds with bush spilling out the top and the sides of the elastic are nice too. I hope in the next chapter, his girlfriend has a bush like that and he has to rake it back with both hands for his mom and sister to get to her huge clit. Keep writing!!!!
I liked the fluency and readability of the text. The initial character development was a pleasant read and it's a bit of a pity that later the story did not expand on that. I like the calm and unhurried development of sexual engagement. One thing that always makes me appreciate a story more is the absence of shopping list kind description of body appearance (breast size this, height that, penis length inches... ) The appearance was introduced gradually and it felt organic. Good story, thank you!
You have a great story going here that can go on for many a chapter.
You have good writing skills.
Keep up the great work and I will await the next chapter of I hope many.
It was very good until the ending, it ended too soon, but gave it 4 star, hoped to hear about Cari & Cindy
Indeed, ImagineDinosaurs provides a superb review. Is agree with it completely.
Very well constructed/told story!
Loved it! Hopefully there'll be a follow-up chapter. Five stars and a favorite point!
I thought this was well written and was written in a way where interest was unlikely to drop off. The subject matter I know to be an actual thing, for want of a better way of describing it. I think it's something that is highly likely to occur. When it came to the female members of my family, same relations as in your story, I too had similar, I'm not saying the exact same or anything, but there were events of sexual tension, the level of tension was probably quite high from my side. Your description of the sexual tension leading to awkwardness, and finally a satisfactory conclusion. was great. I look forward to reading more of your content.
Well-written, but too straight-forward, kind of like having breakfast. Not enough of resistance, seduction, etc. The mother just decides to get naked and then fucks the son. The sister does likewise after a lot of talking. It could be nice if real people did that. but it doesn't make for an arousing story. I gave it three stars.