All Comments on 'Chapter 8: Birthday Boy'

Wow, great chapter, but much darker compared to the others. The only lightness here came from me remembering the wait for new Sears catalogs to arrive to check out the men in the underwear section. Even the description of Debbie's bubbly personality belied a sadness that wasn't present originally. What I originally thought would be a lighthearted fantasy wank piece is now turning into first-class drama and I love it even more. Kudos!

OMG, JC...you know how to tease your readers. Argh...ending chapter when it's most interesting! 😁

Well, Matt is slowly taking the initiative, both in 'gay' and 'straight' world. In a meantime, he is still learning. It is going to be difficult to play the role of 'straight jock' in Christian college and, at the same time, stay truthful to his believes and his principles.

Colton Langley is homophobic, gay which-hunter! He is evil and, very possible in deep denial which makes him even more dangerous! He is going to be Matt's archenemy and it is going to be fight till extermination!

I hope Pole will be saved...and both he and Matt will survive Gay Chapel!