All Comments on 'Christmas Past, Christmas Present Ch. 02'
by SouthernCrossfire
- 10 Comments
Wow! I only gave a suggestion, you have taken it and run with it beautifully! Thankyou!
Love both chapters. But the second blew me away. Reminded of Carmen Allende's writing.
Other than a big editing mistake on page 1 confusing Angela and Paula, the rest was golden. You do a great job of putting human emotions into words. 5*
Chapter 1 was really good I thought. Then I read chapter 2. One if the best I’ve read in quite some time. Thank you.
Awesome story. There is some confusion with Paula/Angela names that tooke awhile to figure out but your story was worth the effort, Thanks!
What a terrific and emotional story. I have to remember not to read these beautifully painted stories during allergy season because my eyes were watering.
Five stars.