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Click hereIf Rhea thought she was getting Jonas and leaving hitch free, she was highly mistaken because right at the door was an over 200 pound solid wall of meat and muscle stopping her with a glare that would make a demon cower, but even he knew Rhea had more guts than a mere demon.
"Get out of my way."
"You're not leaving here with him." Mitch replied letting his anger and spite control his actions rather than reasoning.
"Get. Out. Of. My. Way" she demanded.
"What's going on Mama?" Jonas asked, sleep now long forgotten as he became an unwilling witnedd and the unsuspecting prize in a battle of wills.
"I will..."
"Get the hell out of my way Mitchell!" Thea screamed, the strong facade she had been holding up slowly crunbling as she felt the tears begin to surface and her body trembling.
Jonas looked confused and distraught, unsure of what to do to quell all this tension or how it had even come to be, they had only just been having lunch together and they were having a fairly good conversation that didn't give off any vibes of an impending storn the level of which was now occuring, so how had it all come to this? He held on tightly to his mother, instinctively wanting to protect her from the huge man, but a small part of him wanted to take Mitch's side too.
"If you want to leave, you can get the hell out, but I forbid you to take my son with you!" He raved. There. He had said it in the presence of the person who needed to hear it the most, suddenly all the pent up frustration evaporated from him, he wasn't glaring down at a now wide-eyed Rhea, his previously tense muscled had relaxed and he felt lighter by more than a few tons. But just as the feeling of triumph washed over him, something else stabbed at his heart and that was when the reasoning and rationality that had departed from him when she told him not to take Jonas away returned. Realization knocked into him so hard, he thought the air had left his lungs. He had exposed a damning secret at the wrong place and at the worst of times.
"You're my dad?" Jonas' voice sliced through the thick curtain of silence that had reigned after Mitchell's outburst.
Neither parent replied the child just knowing he would have a barrage of questions before the day ended.
- COMMENTS
Rhea seems to always react to situations and people and is unable to be an intelligent being. She is perceived as immature since she does not express her mind clearly, she reacts to life, she does not take care of herself nor her child. When she and Mitch are discussing, she acts like a child or brainless adolescent but she is a woman and at her age, she should know what she wants and how to get it and express herself for God's sake! She does not have to be a bitch to know what she wants in life, she is a well educated woman, please have her use that brain of hers from time to time because it is getting frustrating to have her depict in such manner. Make her evolve from her adolescence to her womanhood, not only physically but mentally as well.
Your characters suck. This is tawdry and common. I kept with it this long in hopes of finding some redemption in the process but alas, it is now too far gone. No desire to read the next chapter.
Her selfishness and "convenient brain freezes" are making me lose interest.
I had discovered this story.
I'm glad that I did.
:)
Thank You for your stories. Your characters seem real, even down to their flaws that we all have. Love the new character Rebecca, hope you include her in the next chapters.
I think this is great!!! Rhea and Mitch love each other, they just need to figure out a way to make it work. As for the kid. He seems smart and I don't think he's gonna make them spilt up, I feel like he would be pushing them together, to make it work out!! And By God!!! They need to fuuuuuuuuck!!! Without any distractions please :)
Now PLEASE don't take a month to post the next chapter.
Its about time Rhea started thinking with her brain instead of her nether region. She can't control her libido enough to stop being mesmerized by magic-Mitch-dick so she can attend to her son's well-being.
Yes, she should have told him but I can't certainly understand why she didn't. He's controlling, abusive, angry, won't take NO for an answer (and not in the endearing I'm going to win your heart way) and tries to impose his will to the exclusion of what is good for his child.
I really don't like Mitch at all. Jared would have been the better man but at least he's got now-slutty girl from college that shows up on his doorstep and masturbates in his room with Mr. Crass I Gotta Poop watching tv downstairs. Yeah, what a dinner-winner.
Plainshoneybadger
Since Mitch keeps throwing up seeking full custody, please let Rhea remind him how Jonas was conceived and how she was not initially consenting to the sex act... in a sense he did attempt to rape her. She should remind him this will most likely come up in court. And her reason for running and not telling him is simple... he assaulted her when she came to confront him on how he mistreated her friend, that was in a sense his girlfriend. Stop saying he's a jerk, that won't stand up in court, she should be getting in the mind set of court to keep her son... if a court appearance is in this story. And she needs to remind him, that legally she has say of where Jonas sleeps. She should threaten Mitch with attempted kidnapping, he has no legal right to Jonas. Until court ordered blood test and a court hearing, Rhea is giving in to him too early and giving him too much control of her child (her child until blood test). I mean I like the story, but for someone so strong she comes across weak to this guy she openly accuses to being like a bully or a jerk. I just want the story to be sound plausible given that you have clearly established the main characters are strong willed individuals. Please do not take any offense... I hope it doesn't get to court, but I can kind of tell this story will have a lot of twist and turns, all the more interesting!
Right from the beginning I have been completely hooked to this story. I do wish you would stop with the childish behavior though. I don't expect all their problems to go away buy now that Jonas knows about Mitch it would be the perfect time for them to figure out a future for the four of them. Mitch and Rhea obviously love eachother. Wither they want to admit it or not. Jared might as well hook up with that other girl because no matter what Rhea will always want Mitch. I absolutely love this story please update soon!!!<3
UGH I've had enough of this childish behavior, I kept reading, hoping like hell the ADULTS would grow the fuck up, but no, the boy is still the most mature out of all of them 1*
All I can say is...please update soon! Damn baby interrupted a good scene.
Once again the only person with any sense is the the kid! Rhea and Mitch need to go to some therapy or something, because both have some issues. They obviously belong with one another, but damn they need some help. Jared needs to stay with Rebecca. He doesn't have a chance in hell with Rhea, and he only wants her because she reminds him of his first love. They can all eventually be friends. As long as Rhea and Mitch get some damned help!
I am obsessed with this story. I am glad you showcased how Jonas was more aware than any of the adults realized. I really could do without this Jared guy. He seems to just be keeping Mitch and Rhea from being adults about there situations. Update soon!