All Comments on 'Crazy Little Thing Called Sex Pt. 04'

Weird. Thought this chapter was the best of the lot. It also includes my favorite scene in the whole series to write - the part where they're walking on the beach and Jennifer's skirt blows up and how she reacts to it. I just really enjoyed writing that part and I thought it came out just as I imagined it. As someone commented elsewhere, I wanted Jennifer to have an ethereal quality about her that made her stand out. Think I achieved what I set out to do.

In response to the author’s comment, I have enjoyed the whole series, but this portion seems to be more of an interlude. It stands alone and does not seem to significantly further develop the characters. I liked it, but it did not seem essential.