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I like it
Not a fan of this theme but i like the story so far cant wait for next part.
Not sure about this. A tricky subject to be tackling. Can you make it truly erotic, sensitive and exciting? Not sure anyone can.
My 2 cents
More. I am interested in see where you go with this. Thanks for your time and imagination.
Hero
Intriguing storyline. My hope is power corrupts and liberal Marv lets his his inner beast run free. Like Tina says: "we don't need another hero".
Decent start
I want to see where you go with this. It has the beginnings of a good read. Flesh it out more and make the chapters a bit longer, 2 - 3 pages per. Can't wait to see what more you wright.
Good beginning. You establish the terms and the tone. Can't wait to read more.
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Started writing when I got tired of thinking about what a story would be like if characters did this or that, and decided to start writing it myself. Many of my stories will have hard and weird Non-consent themes.
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