All Comments on 'Dave Buys a Slave'

Excellent story, part 2 please.

Tease … now we want to read about their life together … and if he will buy more, as he has still 4+k to spare

Well put together but the starter kit should be an upsale item. The salesman should have to speak to his manger to get Dave a good deal on the collar.

A promising start. I am interested to see where you take this.

Really good start. Looking forward to the next part.

This is a rather common theme and you executed it beautifully and also made me interested where it could go from here. Well done! I hope to see more.

Well shit, I’ve been an avid reader on here for a few months now but never felt like commenting. I wanted to take the time to encourage you to keep going! I like were this is going and will be looking forward to reading more!

So rarely does a story have a character with height, weight, and hair color just like mine! Feels real, and like it was written just for me. I can’t wait for more.

I am looking for more in the series soon.

5 stars! One of the things that made this story so hot for me were the lines about how excited he was, first in anticipation of buying a slave, and then the frequent mentions of how his excitement continued in his enjoyment of her. I also liked his humane and sensitive treatment of her in some areas, as long as that did not get in the way of his sexual enjoyment, which was, after all, the reason he bought her in the first place. I like where this story is going and look forward eagerly to more chapters!

There's an attention to detail, particularly with the mechanics of how everything works that I enjoyed.