All Comments on 'Dazed, Cuckolded and Confused'
by LucianSara
- 10 Comments
Unless I somehow missed it, I see nothing in this story that would make it incest. I feel this is in the wrong category.
No incest, but plenty of humiliating cuckold action. Good story, hope there's more to follow.
Very well written, especially if this is your first story. You should get together with an editor here on literotica, for typos and grammar. This story is too good and those tiny mistakes create speedbumps in the flow of your story. Also, this story should be moved to LOVING WIVES. Please keep writing. You're obviously talented.
Not because this isn't incest. Too many people just can't seem to be able to read the second part of the category title.
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However, you still have the wrong category. This is clearly fetish, not taboo.
I read this out of curiosity hoping that the worm would have turned....it didn't.
I love sex in all it's many guises but I truly cannot understand why or how a heterosexual male could get turned on by being submissive to another male and allowing his girlfriend/wife to humiliate him. He'd have been wearing his balls for earrings and she'd have wanted a nose job.
I see you were shooting for the "Taboo" aspect of the category. Technically, this story belongs in "Loving Wives." Unfortunately, much of the readership there is heterosexual men who have been involuntarily cheated on, so your story would get really trashed over there. Commentors in that category often tell cuckolds to post their stories in "Fetish", but you miss a lot of readers that way. There is a small minority, but still a significant number of men who will read and love a good cuckold story in "Loving Wives" though. There are a number of well-rated cuckold stories there. Some people would even say you should put your story in "BDSM" because of the D/s elements, but generally BDSM readers do not appreciate cuckoldry. It is quite the conundrum, where to put your story, given the current categorization.
I see no rosa-blanca.ru for your story. They help readers decide if they want to read a particular story as well as provide a way of finding stories they are interested in reading. You need at least "cuckold" but "Domme" also, I would think.