by jd8406
You REALLY need an editor, i.e. "You're so loving in the way you caress my intimate parts."
You need to get an editor. Was the plug 3 or 5 inches? Continuity makes a story flow…little slip ups like that can ruin the enjoyment of the read.
Thos must have been written using chatgpt or some other ai bot, people do not speak like they so in this story
Also, most of the anonymous comments must be coming from the same person, they all seem the same. Probably the same thing with the ratings...