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Click here"I'm fine," I assured her. "You just gave me an idea on how I might turn the fiasco of today into a positive."
"I did?" She asked.
"You did, gorgeous," I told her.
"Careful, Kenny. Someone might start thinking that you like me," She warned.
"I do like you, Michelle," I confirmed.
"I know you do. You can't help it. I'm blonde after all," She joked.
I shook my head and sighed.
"Hey, Kenny? I kind of like you too." She confessed.
"Only kind of?" I teased.
"All right, not just kind of but don't get cocky on me or anything," She told me.
"I wouldn't dream of it, Michelle," I smiled.
- COMMENTS
What the hell, Ken forgets to tell the Dick's/Security all five thugs had knives the medal detector did not detect? i.e. professional level
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The Park has PTZ cameras but lost ALL five thugs in the crowd? They never get the silver cars license number, make, model? [Gimmy a break]
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An ex-SEAL cannot give detailed descriptions of the five thugs; particulars/race/tat's/etc? He recognizes one thug and it's not PRIORITY?
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An ex-SEAL does not catch the cues the thug leader gave him; like 'Grayson" by name - how would he know that? Thug-Leader made reference of reading Grayson's file - how did he get it, from whom? Should lead all to recognize insider-info on security and movements.
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What I'm reading is fumbling keystone-cops disgracing Operator-level SEALS.
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2.8*** hooyah 10yrs-USN CPO
Great story up till the end of page 3. They don’t use their phones to call for help. Page 4, Then when they’re in security office at aquarium they still don’t call for help. I’m sorry but getting to stupid to continue reading. I was really enjoying the story until then. LM
need to get moving agree with other remarks just a bit too many words but good story.........................
It’s a good story however way, way too verbose. Why only use five words when you can stretch it out to fifteen. It does need serious editing. And I speak as an editor.