All Comments on 'Educating Laura Ch. 05'

5 stars

I liked how it was plotted out. You took time with the details.

I liked how this story flows now, I think you did well with chaptering this as it is. I love the British English and your quirky characters. The BDSM elements are not my cup of tea, but the way you write them, I almost hope they were :-D you make it sound very intriguing.

Well done! Keep up the good work!

Love the story so far. And it seems we both may have been to the location where the story is set. I remember the long walk to the tap and bridge over the river.

As always, wonderful dialogue with context.

I'll be watching for more.

There are so many good aspects again this: dialogue, characters, small details that give depth to the narrative.