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Escaping the Past

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This story is part of the 750 Word Project in Literotica. The challenge was to write a story using Literotica's minimum word count of 750 words and only 750 words. It was a fun challenge. I had three ideas and this is the one I decided to complete. Some day I may submit the others without an event, just because. I encourage everyone to give it a try.

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I was at a club listening to the latest thing when she walked in. The latest thing was something called "jazz," and all the dolls came out to listen and dance. I was lighting a fag with my head down, so I missed her approach to my table. I normally like to be alone unless I invite someone over, but this dame had a nice set of headlights and great gams.

I didn't need to introduce myself; clearly she knew who I was.

Now I wanted to get to know her. Nookie was never a problem for me, but there was something about this one that suggested just having seen me in the movies or at the theater might not do the usual trick.

"Please join me....?"

"Dorothy. Thank you. I saw you alone and have been a fan."

"Well then, you know everything about me, I'd imagine."

"I know what I read in the papers. What's something no one knows about you?"

There was something about her that suggested she disapproved of some of what she read. I'm no sap, so instead of regaling her with stories of who I'd rubbed elbows with, I told her something I'd never before told anyone.

"You'll get the goods, but be careful what you wish for."

"I'm a modern girl. I won't be fainting at anything you say. Just keep it square daddy-o."

"This is a story about my first wife."

This got a reaction from her. "I didn't know you had a wife before Bess."

I knew I had her hooked. I told her my hidden past.

"I was young when I met Frieda and she was the bees knees. We got married and got our own place. It was a small apartment that was cold in the winter and hot in the summer. We didn't care, though, because it was ours. Not ours because we rented and didn't own it, but it was ours because we shared it.

"We struggled, back then, but we were in love. I worked mostly nights. It was gig to gig back then. I was doing magic at that time. They called me 'The King of Cards.' I was making ends meet but it was scary each month.

"My gig got canceled that night, so I came home early. I opened the door and saw Frieda with another man in flagrante."

Her eyes lit up, "You mean fucking?"

Damn. This dame had moxie. I gave her my charming smile.

"It was a sight I'd never seen. He took her from behind like an animal. I was in shock. I thought she was being defiled. I charged him and then I was punched in the stomach and I went down. I lost my breath. When I recovered, I was tied to a chair with the ropes from my own apartment I used for my magic act. I strained against the ropes, but was unable to free myself. I looked up and saw him continue.

Frieda was encouraging him, if you can believe that. I screamed out, "Baby! Please stop this."

"I can't Erik. His cock is so big. I need this."

I struggled against my bindings. I couldn't watch and closed my eyes. I couldn't close my ears. I heard her screams of pleasure, as I heard the sound of him entering her again and again. All I could manage to do was tip my chair backward and take a knock on the head. That's when the lights went out. When I opened my eyes, she and he were gone.

"I can't imagine getting over something like that. You clearly did though. Still, it must have had an effect."

"It certainly did. That night was a Friday; I hated Fridays for a while, bleccch. Now I love them. I decided to transform myself. Erik Weisz was dead. Frieda Weisz was dead to me as well. I became a new person. I would never again be tied up and not unable to escape. I would never again be unable to take a punch like that. I would be the one who women wanted, not a victim. "

"That's quite a tale. Thank you, Mr. Houdini."

"Call me Harry."

She pointed out her wedding ring. "I'm not some chippy, Mr. Houdini."

With that, she left. I had played my cards wrong there. Well, the night was young and the dolls were plentiful.

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Thanks to jezzaz for creating the event and all those who assisted. Thanks Black Randi for editing my story. Sadly, even at only 750 words I did need an editor. She also thinks my story is 15 words short. My word processing software says it is exactly 750. Please count and let us know which of is is correct. As always, I'll try to reply to all comments for the first two days and all emails after.

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SyzyguySyzyguyalmost 2 years ago

Neat story, neat twist and a time-travelling vocabulary (that's praise not criticism). Many thanks.

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago
Again

Great short using a historical figure getting shot down.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
It was "cute" but irritating

The effort to use the imagined vernacular of long ago just made the story fade into the background. IMHO

But thanks for the effort.

etchiboyetchiboyover 4 years ago
750-words... AND Historic.

And well written, as usual. Bravo!

5-stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Pipes, get back on the saddle.

Some of us need your lightness and mirth. You are the only author in 2019 to nring joy into LW.

Tiger27Tiger27over 4 years ago

Straight out of a Spillane novel.

DogFuzzDogFuzzabout 5 years ago
Say What?

Dang Man, you started that off like a detective mystery from the 60s. Like Mickey Splaine. Yeah I know, the spelling is incorrect. It’s been a long time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
This was...

...the bees knees daddy-o... thanx!

Loklie

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 5 years ago
My god

Headlights, gams, daddy-o.

Where the heck did you drag this from, your 1960 collection. Laughed so much had to stop reading.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Too Brainy?

Good, creative story, but how many of your readers know how Houdini died?

PiperHamlinPiperHamlinover 5 years agoAuthor
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A bit delayed this time, but sometimes life happens. As always, addressed in the order posted.

"I guess that infidelity was the one thing he couldn't escape."

True dat. I had to research Houdini to find out that apparently he liked the ladies.

"Word count in 734, so doesn't count for this 'challenge'"

It seems I should get bonus points. I did it in less. I should also point out there is no cash prize.

"That was great. You told the story with a little flair. Great job with the.period language too."

I'm a sucker for old American slang. I couldn't possibly sustain a period piece, but this event let me indulge my language fetish.

"This story reminded me of one of my favorite Dylan songs."

"'The greatest escape I ever made was when I left Appleton, Wis.' - H.H."

It's nice when I research a story, then someone hits me with something I missed. Full marks on the comment.

"Good one. Nice surprise at the end. 5*"

The surprise only works if people didn't know his real name. I didn't before I did research. I'm glad it worked for you my German friend.

"Good story. I'm giving 5 stars for writing a good story with LESS that the Lit minimum - and getting it posted. Well done. Thanks for the effort."

You are wise.

"That's why Houdini became an escape artist? Who knew?"

It's a story that needed to be told.

"'Erik Weisz was dead' - I recognized the name right away. I was also familiar with the stomach punch."

You would recognize that name. I had to look it up.

"Interesting mysterious introduction but a lot is left out so this is a weakness of 750 stuff. I'd like to read a little more elaborate idea."

Ah, but I would not be the one to write it. I don't have the resources to drop everything and do a period piece for a site that pays... well, nothing.

"I'm a Houdini fan so of course I recognized the name immediately. It was fun reading fiction about such a well known character."

I'm glad it still worked for you even if you knew where it was going.

"Short of words or not, I had to give it a 5"

Please proselytize.

"Two escape artists in one story. Dorothy escaped as well."

Indeed.

"USING THE TONY CURTIS MOVIE"

I'll have to look that one up.

"nicely done story. With a nice twist."

I love it when someone calls me nice!

"I'm always glad to see new things from you."

Thanks for commenting. I was worried you only liked me for my relationship with Wobbles.

"But somehow I wanted him to have his wife and her lover arrested and charged"

A natural feeling. I had 750 words to work with and I invented both of those characters. If it helps, they both lived unhappily ever after.

"Plots stolen from GA? Hilarious!"

I live for the rosa-blanca.ru! This is a good opportunity for me to acknowledge the actual story I ripped a plot device from. The story is "Friday." It's in this category.

blackrandl1958blackrandl1958over 5 years ago
Nice story, Piper

Plots stolen from GA? Hilarious! Thanks for the entertainment, Randi.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Old school like Turner Classic Movies

But somehow I wanted him to have his wife and her lover arrested and charged. Then you had a so-called "modern woman" listen to his tale and then just leave him. That seemed like an odd conclusion. Not much to this.

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