All Comments on 'Everything You Want Ch. 01'
by nerd4music
- 26 Comments
Another great start. I can 't wait until the next update. Connor is wonderful!!!
i found that comment about n****r disgraceful thats just disgusting you pig. Any way to the author i really enjoyed it .........carry on please quick.
I love your stories. I was hoping you would do a story for angie and conner. I got my wish. As for the fool pay him no mind. Keep doing what you doing.
This was a very nice story and I look forward to reading more between them. As for the idiot's comment from earlier? Ignore it and go with your gut - no one asked them to read an interracial story and they could stop reading at anytime. Keep up the good work!
lust_4_u
You've done a great job in creating the opening to Ange/Connor's story. Your character development of their personality traits is done well as a reader gets a true sense of how their history has developed their relationship and how they feel about each other. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to Chapter 2 and beyond.
Love the fact that they have two differnt personalities. Reminds me of my husband and I! Please continue with the story... I am looking forward to it.
great story i am so happy you are writing Angie and connor's story, please pay no mind to the hater
I am in love with this story. Nice Foo Fighters nod and I happen to love guys who sing and play guitar. Please write more...seriously this story is awesome. I'm waiting to see what happens
Oh PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE finish this one. I can just tell it's going to be fantastic!
The characters and their relationship building is great.Only thing weird is the timeline. TMNT and bodywash?
you are definitely my favorite writer on this site. i'm so happy that i found your stories. can't wait to move on to the next chapters.
oh, and the timeline is not off at all, to the previous commenter. ever heard of retro t-shirts? :)
My eyes teared up when I read his choice! I LOVE that song, especially the breathe out/breathe you in part. Freakin' beautiful!
I'm lovin the story so far...
refreshing to realize someone else shares a passion for music so much so that they include it in their writing. That is what i hope to accomplish with my writing.
And the song choices? Awesome. I love foo fighters and that part of your story definitely made me "Awwww". Cant wait to see what comes next....(reading for the first time!)
I love how you had Everlong in there. I like the whole series, as well One night, and Only you. This whole group of friends is awesome
it's my favorite and fits perfectly with this story. sigh...