All Comments on 'Exhibitionist Girl Goes to the Mall'

That's it??

Very easy to read and nice descriptive prose. But I felt like the title and the opening promised something more public. This feels like more of a solo adventure than an interaction between an exhibitionist and those who watch. The ending hints at more exhibitionism, but then the story is over. Maybe this is a beginning?

Yes, yibala, I wanted this to be part 1 of a bigger series. Thanks for your comment! I'll keep it in mind.

Great story, just want to hear about her bus ride home with our any knickers on under her skirt.

Your writing is gentle and ambient.