All Comments on 'Falling Snow Ch. 05'

If you haven't already, go over to the literotica forums and vote in the yearly story contest. Chapter 1 of Falling Snow is entered in the erotic horror category. -NP

I love the twists you have created so far in your story. Though I do have a question. If Sara is a Warlock then does she summon demons too? Or is she a wizard/witch because of the wand? Just looking for clarification cause you mention in an earlier chapter she doesn't approve of Tom comforting with succubus. Anyways been looking forward for a while for this story. I am glad you are continuing it. And yes I understand about only writing when you feel like it. Quality over quantity everytime. Looking forward to the next. Cheers

Good questions.

Wizard and Warlock are interchangeable terms for the most part. The term witch is considered to be a bit derogatory by female warlocks. It’s not something I’m going to focus on, but I wanted magical society to mirror our own. Think 1950’s America with wands. Domestic magic for domestic duties sort of thing. Sara is a powerful and capable Warlock. She snapped at Tom in Chapter 4 when he called her a witch by mistake because he essentially called her a “susie homemaker.”

As for summoning magic, Sara has been PROPERLY trained in summoning magic. The act of summoning a demon from the pit is an incredible dangerous task. One screw up can leave you dead or worse. You are typically taught while surrounded by older more capable warlocks and with elaborate safety measures in place. Sara thinks that the fact that Tom is being taught how to summon creatures from the pit BY a creature from the pit, to be idiotic. She also thinks that for a horny college boy to be in bed with (literally and figuratively) a pair of succubi to be especially idiotic.

Love this series. Can't wait for the next chapter to come out. I hope it's soon

I hope it will be more I will click here everyday I like it so far

I like the story,can't wait to read more so keep it up

Wonderful series, it isn't good for fapping Imho but it is a wonderful story nonetheless and if it were made into a novel I'd buy several copies. Keep up the great work and have a wonderful day.

we want more, not the fapping type like someone else said but I hardly ever do to stories really anyways. But I love the storyline, the hot sex with the violence and action. A+

Please write more. One of the few series I’ve enjoyed over the years reading Literotica

Nice update.

Great

I just wanna say that this was great to read while on acid