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Click here"Every bitch has a weak spot."
"And Helen's weak spot is Diana. She'll do anything for her little sister. That's why we need the skanky ho on our side."
"Hmmm... What about the board?" Any progress?"
Marianne sighed. "The share refuses to go down."
"So fucking what?" Nadine raised her voice. "Tell that cheap ass bitch, Susan, that to steal big money you need to invest big money."
"You guys just do your part, Nadine, we'll do ours."
"Is that what she sent you here to tell me?" Nadine snorted. "So you're her little errant boy, now?"
"Hey."
"Okay, noted. Now off you fuck."
"There's just one thing I've been dying to ask you," Marianne said.
"Just one?"
"That sweet little angel Diana is dragging around these days."
Nadine squinted her eyes. "What about Kevin?"
"Nothing. Have you seen something half as beautiful in your entire life?"
"What it's to you?"
"Nothing, really. But when all is said and done, I wouldn't mind a nibble on that piece of ass," Marianne licked her lips. "Or a mouthful."
"Kevin has little to do with the Brion sisters. He's just Diana's boyfriend."
"So?"
"So he's off limits," Nadine said.
"Says who?"
Nadine closed the gap between herself and the fat woman in a flash. "You're forgetting who you're talking to," she said in a low voice. "You ain't so important that I can't remind you really quick."
Marianne paled. "I'm... I'm sorry, Nadine, I didn't mean to disrespect you, but-"
"You meant exactly that. I'll pretend you simply didn't say what you said. You better remember that I'm not one for second chances."
"I... I think you need to take care of that."
"What?"
Marianne motioned with her head, and Nadine turned. Iman stood at the living room's entrance; her nightdress had a huge reddish-brown stain in the crotch area.
"Fuck! Not again."
"I didn't mean to disrespect you," Marianne said.
"Close the door on your way out, Marianne." Nadine walked to her little sister, not sparing the fat woman a second glance. "Hey sweetie, you've had your period again." She kissed Iman's cheek.
"My tummy hurts."
"You're starting to get them regularly. It's a good thing. It means you're becoming a woman."
"I don't want to become a woman," Iman pouted. "It hurts."
"Come, I'll help you clean and put a tampon. You know sweetie, it's not all that bad, growing up. You'll soon need a nice boyfriend."
"Sharif is my boyfriend."
"Sharif is sweet, but he's seventy-five. I mean someone your age."
"I would like that." Iman smiled dreamily. "We can play together with my toys."
"There are other games too. Wonderful games that you can play with your boyfriend."
Iman giggled.
"For a special girl like you, we'll need a special kind of boy. Someone tender like you, and sweet, and thoughtful and patient. And tonight, I just met a young boy that is tailored to this job."
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There has been a dark hole inside of Helen for so long it was practically a family member. One that nobody really likes, but he's always coming to dinner anyway. Tonight, it grew heavier, and she wondered if there would come a time when it may consume her entirely.
She wanted to sleep the hurt off, but on the other hand, she didn't want to go back to the big empty bed. There was little escape for her there; her night was full of nightmares about Iraq. She sat in the kitchen in darkness and tried not to think of anything because everything hurt.
Helen went outside to the warm city air in the kitchen's balcony. It was wet with rain. She took off her shoes and black silk stockings, both purchased for tonight's date with Dennis. She shivered barefoot in a rain puddle, and that somehow felt better. Sure-footed she jumped on the balcony's rail, and balanced herself, holding the cornice.
She stared for a long time at the blinking city lights. People down there were another species from her.
And what if I jump? A few frightening seconds and then there will be no pain.
Who will even care?
Her boss, William, would care. He liked her.
Diana? She wasn't so sure.
Who else?
Helen heard the penthouse door opening. She jumped back into the kitchen and sat herself down. She heard Kevin talking, and her sister slurring something in return. Probably drunk again, or worse. Kevin struggled to drag Diana into the shower and after that to the bedroom. The house became quiet again. Suddenly Kevin's silhouette appeared at the kitchen door. He was drying his spikes after a shower with a towel, wearing shorts and a T-shirt. He approached the refrigerator and took out some meatballs he had made this afternoon, humming "If you can't be with the one you love, honey, love the one you're with."
When he turned, Kevin noticed her sitting in the dark behind him and jumped two feet in the air. "Hey, you gave me a heart attack. What are you doing sitting like that in the dark? How was your date?"
She took a deep breath. "How was yours?"
"Crazy. And that's the understatement of the century. So, how did it go with the mysterious guy from the dating site?"
"Okay," she said quietly.
"That was the saddest okay I've ever heard." Kevin turned the dimmer switch halfway. "I meant how-" he stopped in mid-sentence as he saw her face. "Helen, what happened?"
The amount of tenderness in his voice hit her chest and climbed up to her eyes, almost opening the tap again. She had to pinch her knee to stop herself from crying.
"Helen, what happened?"
"Nothing happened."
"Like hell! Did the guy do something to you? Did he hurt you?"
"Nothing happened."
"Helen, don't bullshit the bullshitter. What happened?"
"He..." She never dreamed of sharing such things with anyone. But Kevin already knew so much. He knew facts about her that she never even shared with her mother. "The asshole called me an ugly one-eyed freak who thinks he's a girl."
"What?" Kevin raised his voice. "Was he mental?"
"I don't think so." She shrugged. "Anyway, it happened; not a big deal. Shit happens. What can you do?"
"I kinda want to go out, find the guy and kick the shit out of him. I also wanna hug you, but I'm afraid that you'll kick the shit out of me if I do."
"Good thing that you're afraid, then. I don't like hugs," Helen said.
"Why the hell did he say that?" Kevin said.
"Maybe he thought that I'm an ugly freak and it slipped out when I made him angry?"
"What? Nobody thinks you're an ugly freak, Helen."
"You do, Kevin."
"Are you nuts?" He raised his voice again.
"You said it yourself. Ugly as fuck. On the inside as well as on the outside."
"What? I never said that... Oh," he frowned. "You mean..."
She nodded.
"On the first night when we met. You mean when I talked with my dad on the phone?"
"Yeah."
"But it... It doesn't make it true. I was hurt. You were right, I was childish when I didn't pay rent and pretended that I can just keep going like that forever with no repercussions. But I was hurt, and I searched for someone to blame. I didn't want to blame myself, and Diana is really too self-centered to take any responsibility. So, I blamed you. I wanted to hurt you bad."
"Mission accomplished. I cried myself to sleep that night," she said.
"Fuck!" Kevin sat at the table and rubbed his hair. "I'm like a tornado when it comes to you, Helen Brion. Aint I? I keep wrecking and wrecking. Do you want to know what I really thought when I first met you?"
"No."
"I'll tell you anyway. I thought that you were, hands down, the most beautiful woman that I ever met in person."
"Yeah, right. Especially the-" Helen circled her finger around the eyepatch.
"In a sexy pirate like way. But still... You're like a taller Charlize Theron with an eyepatch."
"Kevin, stop."
"Would I say that just to make you feel better?"
"Uh... Yeah?"
"You're probably right. It doesn't make it a lie, though." His voice softened again. "Everyone thinks you're a stunning woman, Helen. Me too. Everyone except you that is. I thought you were beautiful and cold when we first met. An Iceberg. But I know it's bullshit now. It's just something you do because you're scared all of the time."
"Scared of what?"
He shrugged. "Of almost everything."
"You know what Kevin, I appreciate the effort, but please leave me alone. Okay?"
"What?"
"Let me be. I need to be alone with myself right now."
"Helen?"
"Please."
"Okay," he rose reluctantly.
"I'm better off like that. All alone." A big tear blossomed at the corner of her eye, went down her cheek, traveling the trail of her scar and splattered on the table. "I don't know what the hell I was thinking to myself. Going on a stupid date."
"Helen..." he said tenderly.
"Please, go away, Kevin."
"Okay, I'm going." He raised his hands, turned and reached the kitchen's door, but then he stopped. "You know what?" He turned around. "No! Not okay! Not by a long shot." He turned a chair around and sat down leaning on the backseat. "I'm going to sit here, and I'm going to give you some constructive criticism. And I know that I'm only twenty-one and a kid and that I haven't learned to own my shit yet, but you're going to listen anyway. Cause frankly, Helen, I think that you're doing it all wrong."
"Doing what?"
"Everything."
She laughed, and it came out as half a sob. "Can you be more general, less specific, Kevin?"
"Almost everything. You go to work early every morning, and you come home late, and you work some more, or just hide in your room."
"I'm not hiding."
"Once you're home, you don't go out, and you never talk to anybody. That's not life. That's... I don't know what it is. I told you that I thought that Valkyrie is a lot like Hamlet."
"Hamlet?"
"Because just like him, she never decides to do anything. She stands on the fence. She has a lot to say about everything, but she'll never say it to anyone other than to a letter that no one will ever read. And life... Life is just something that happens to other people. She never told Sergeant Robert that he's a futaphobe asshole. She never told Andy how she felt about him."
Helen felt her heart squeeze. She wanted Kevin to stop, and at the same time, she didn't.
"And I know why you're sitting on the fence, Helen. It's safe there. You can't get hurt if you don't play. Almost nothing bad ever happens on the fence. But you know what? Nothing good ever happens there either. And sometimes it feels like the world is one big pile of shit, especially when you meet a douchebag. But you can't just raise a white flag when that happens. The world is not a pile of shit, it's full of amazing things. Did you know that nice gangsters exist?"
"What?" She laughed.
"I shit you not." He laughed. "They do. I just found out about it tonight. It's hard to get off the fence, and it's frightening. But you can't spend your life being afraid all the time; it's too painful. So," he rose. "So, I'm going to hug you now, and I don't really care if you'll kick the shit out of me. I ain't afraid no more."
He went to her and hugged her head to his chest, encircling her in his arms. At first, she went stiff like a mannequin at a shop window, her hands closed so hard her nails burrowed into her skin. Her body started shivering. But then she begun breathing again. His smell came to her nostrils, and he smelled like Kevin. There was heartache in it, but also a spark of a promise.
"I get it now that adults should own their shit, Helen, but it doesn't mean they have to do it all alone? It's okay to be afraid sometimes, it's okay to be weak sometimes, and it's okay to say, 'hey you there, I think I need a hug.'" He kissed the top of her head.
Helen thought of her mother and how she used to kiss her like that and how much she missed her. The human touch was absent from her life for so many years that she had forgotten how good it felt. The hunger inside her that she thought she lost forever ignited again.
"You're missing everything this world has to offer. But that's just half of it. The world is missing you, Helen. I know it does because I read your letters. You're smart, and funny, and kind, and full of empathy, and brave, and strong, and weak, and really an amazing person all over. And you're not going to sit on the fence no more because I'm not going to let you do it anymore."
"What?"
"Yeah. I won't. You'll see. That's gonna be my redemption for being such an asshole, calling you names, making you cry, and reading your personal letters. You just wait and see, Helen Brion." He kissed her top again. "You just wait and see."
After a while, Helen stopped shaking and leaned her head against his chest. It felt really nice. Her breathing became shallower, and she retracted her claws like a kitten. They stayed like that in the kitchen like two little children, forgotten without guidance and direction. Each gaining strength from the other's presence. Helen wanted to tell Kevin a million things and needed to ask him a million questions, but she kept her mouth shut. She didn't want to ruin the moment, and she didn't want him to stop hugging her.
To be continued...
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- COMMENTS
I truly love this story and it's characters. The characters are developing in front of my very eye's. They have depth. The storyline is compelling and believable. I've become attached to them. Even bratty selfish Diane. I want to explore her back story to find out how she evolved into her present person. I cant wait to read more of this story as well as your other creations! But this first!
This isn’t my scene, but the writing is excellent, the characters’ development and the expose of the hurtful impact of harsh accusatory hate-filled words upon the vulnerable psyche of the unusual/exceptional is very well done in a non preachy way.
I’m surprised to find myself rooting for romantic love and the complete supportive affectionate relationship to be the winner. Methinks Helen, but Nadine may be in the running too, the narcissistic nut job will have to move on.
5*
Jim
A real budding, and very real, love story in the making — mutual rescue, I think/hope.
I don't know if the author will read this but I just got to this chapter for the first time and I am baffled by how incredibly written this story is. Like, I searched for futa on male stories and found something that actually brought tears to my eyes, something that tackles abuse and love and hate and pain better than a lot of 'normal' stories do, all the while being a good futa on male story still. They have a real gift, and I wish them the best in life.
P.S. The handful of people hating in the comments are bafflingly dumb in their 'criticisms', like I don't even know how these people live day to day without forgetting how to breath or something. Constructive criticism is good, but don't listen to nonconstructive criticism.
So, when Nadine goes downstairs:
"There's a monster in the basement, next to a steaming pile of foreshadowing," - WW
awesome story. I had really hoped that the sight of Kevin hurt or cheating with Nadine would sort of change Diana and push them closer together.
Reading up until now it feels like everything is setup for Helen, but I'd like he stayed with Diana for some reason.
anyways, great work, I'm really enjoying this one
I just love the vivid illustrations especially of Nadine taking Kevin. Their sex is amazing. In fact, if I was him, then Nadine's love-making and care would automatically make me submit
Simply loving the slow build, the broadening of horizons and the character development. I can see a lot of dangerous signs for the future, I wonder where you are taking this and in a very happy to find this story!
Kevin and Helen is THE first and only time i've ever rooted for two characters to get together in a more than sexual relationship in a long form erotic fiction. Nadine is a complex character, far more depth than most secondary characters on literotica. What happened to Imma is tragic and makes me sick, but it's a fiction of reality in the muslim world where FGM is still tragical common. Thanks for writing this story that has such depth and conviction.
Brilliant writing, thank you so much. Great storyline, well written and I just want to keep reading more.
I’ve never read this style of writing before, it’s very hot and so human.
End of chapter 4, and want to read more. You are doing great so far. keep it up!!! 5 stars. Well written. Thanks.
Didn’t expect one story to make me really horny AND give me tears in less than 5 minutes but here we are…..
I was waiting for this moment. Helen and Kev have what it takes to have a real relationship. I hope they connect.
When Nadine stepped in to protect Kevin I was like "Don't. Fuck. With Aria!"
Diana is just downright a spoiled lazy controlling bitch and a half,I wish Helen would beat the shit out of Diana's ass for the shit she does.Helen admittedly is stonecold but in some chapters she lets her vulnerable side come out,and shows she is not the evil mean Woman she claims to be.I look forward to more of Helen most of all,but the others too.
I’m suspicious that you might have stolen the plot from Sabrina, but Shakespeare stole a lot of his plots too so I can’t really criticize. Really want to see a futanari Some Like It Hot or futanari Casablanca now.
I accidentally selected 2 stars, when I meant to rate this as 1 star!!!
I'm super conflicted right now. I literally just picked a random story to try and get some good futa in before I went to sleep, and I stumbled across this beautiful masterpiece. But the reason I'm conflicted actually has nothing to do with me staring a book halfway through like usual. It's that I'm not sure who I think Kevin should be with. Nadine is beautiful, kind, and amazingly rich. Helen is beautiful, with the slightly damaged side that makes her feel much more realistic, and an incredible ability to control her emotions. Both are amazing and I believe would make Kevin so happy and he would make them just as happy. The only decision I've been able to come to is that Diana is a backstabbing bitch and Kevin should dump her on the side of a road. Please help my confusion!!
Because I'm entranced... what a great story!
Bed calls, sadly empty, but unsatisfied as I am sexually, I'm very happy emotionally. Very much looking forward to more of your tale,
Jason
Just finished, it's 4:14am couldn't stop. You're a gifted writer.
You suck, you make this incredible story that I can’t put down and I’m surprised at how much it moves me and it is on a sex stories site keep up the good work
I,m gonna be really bummed if kevin and helen don,t end up together though.
Off to chapter one!
Okay, so this chapter definitely spun things out into a pretty crazy direction. Still enjoying it. And so long as Kev ends up with his Valkyrie and Diana gets some serious payback, I'll be happy with wherever the story goes...no matter how crazy it gets. At this point I can't decide whether their romance is more compelling or my desire to see Diana suffer is what's really keeping me hooked.
You've developed a really amazing story here, it started out a bit silly, but the more and more I read, the more I surprisingly find myself invested in these characters and what happens to them, the more I want certain ones to rise, and others the fall. I never come here to be engrossed by story, but you've managed to do it, and I thank you for that.
Probably the best story I've read on this site, at one point I was horn and the the next I had tears. Please God continue this story, I need to see the ending to this.
P.S. Helen is the best character in this whole story for me, the depth to her character is simply astonishing.
Amazing plot and very well written! Cannot wait to read the next part!
Love the story and the imagery.
And that live making scene with Nadine and Kevin is one of the hottest I have ever read. Wonderful.
loved it please dont stop i am in love with helen she deserves much more
Although I only signed up recently, mainly to leave comments, I’ve been reading Literotica stories for several years. Naturally they have varied from being very good down to absolute s**t. This is one of the best I’ve read. The characters are developing well and there’s a proper storyline which you don’t always get even in good stories. I liked Nadine turning out to be a nice person(?) as far as Kevin is concerned but ruthless in other ways but I didn’t like the suggestion that Kevin might be used as a nanny for Iman. There’s plenty of room for him to develop into something more than he is now. Several ways this story can go and I look forward to enjoying the experience of finding out.
I'm super hooked on this story! I'm dying to know what happens next. The sex is hot and getting hotter, but honestly the Helen stuff is the best part.
I have truly enjoyed this story, it is filled with a lot of real emotions. I enjoy the progress in your writing and in the characters themselves especially Helen. The relationship between Kevin and Nadine was wonderful, I hope that continues. I am looking forward to the ending!
The stories keep getting better and better. If this becomes long enough, please print a book, because I'm gonna buy.
I love this story. It’s one ☝️ f the best I’ve read in a long time. I keep looking for more with each page. I’m waiting for Helen and Kevin to make love and give her selfish sister the boot.
Became immediately engrossed. Find myself wanting to turn the page and know more. Not just the about the sex but the characters and the intrigue. Starting to feel like a sexy Grisham novel with way better sex.
What an amazing story! You are such a fantastic writer. I was really hoping little Kevin would spend the night with Madam Hulk, but i'll guess thats for another chapter? And are we gonna see Kevin as a Lace Boy maybe?
Anyway, cant wait for the next update! Hope its coming soon
I just wanted to say that you truly have a gift with your story telling! Love the characters, love the sex. You are simply an amazing writer and not only do I have you bookmarked, I would urge you to make this a novel/series to put up on Amazon or somewhere else so I can throw some money at you to keep pumping out these chapters! I seriously can't get enough of your polished, emotional writing.
at first i wanted helen and kevin to get together, but now I'm hoping that Nadine and her sister get him. whatever the outcome, the story is great and I hope you continue to write.
I'm Hooked really enjoy reading this series. But now if you could only write faster because now I just have to wait for the next segment.
I absolutely love this story! The character interactions are spot on! And I love the little background scheme going on with Nadine! Also Yesssssss Kevin and Helen need to just get together!
Didn't like this one as much the other chapters due to the fact that Kevin first romantic sex wasn't with Helen... But that would had been cliche. Still good read and added to the characters though. Now to take a break from this site to give you time for the next chapter.
Kevin and Helen, Kevin and Helen, Kevin and Helen! And some more Nadine. I am becoming attached to these characters. Really, the plot is wide open. I hope to read a lot more.
This was the best chapter so far, perhaps because Kevin got a break from Diana's toxic talons for a bit. The writing is amazing and provocative, and not just the sex. I acknowledge that art should be challenged, but I'm unsettled that, as Kevin finds himself sinking deeper into a world of other aggressive f's, the phobic crap that he admonished while on campus might have substantial support. Some of these women are downright dangerous, and the lace boys are trafficked goods. That Helen, with a physical deformity, and Iman, with a mental impairment, are the only two women with dicks to not be shady or worse. People might say, c'mon, it's erotica, but this is an amazing series because it works on multiple levels. To build such a convincing world, but make Kevin its goldhearted hero would miss an opportunity for Helen to truly shine. I'm confident that she will, because she's not called Valkyrie for nothing. I can't wait to see what's next! Great work!
This will be my first comment on anything I have ever read here. And...I have taken in quite a bit of the fantasies that exist within. You have an amazing way with words, you're like a poet...I think? I am sorry I'm terrible at expressing the way I feel about it. But..Its really well written, it's very erotic and st the same time I feel captivated by the stories of Helen Kevin and Nadine. Please keep writing! I am very eager to see more of your work. looking forward to hearing back from you.
Forever your fan,
Strife.
I think the whole series is amazing!! WANT MORE!!
I'll probably give up reading after you finish this story!
Please make it last!
;)
Now that's getting way to good, stop or i won't be able to read another story lmao.
Seriously Bad ass job dude *i wish Iman will Fuck the shit out of Kevin*
One monent im getting off to some amazingly written sex scenes next im having my heart tugged by chracters (im now well and truly emotionally devoted to now) making amends and setting sail on a ship that i certainly do ship.
Your story is well and above the best content I've read on this site. I care a lot less about the Lewds, and a lot more about the relationship between helen and Kevin!
You made the story so interesting that I read first fap later LOL. Thanks for the amazing content. looking forward to seeing helen open up (hopefully) and be happy. also...Im incredibly impressed with the Nadine character development...just WOW. She's a sweet heart!
5/5 keep up the good work.
S.D.G.
You, sir, are a genius !
This story is amazing, by far the best erotic story I ever read and this chapter was no exception.
The writting is top-notch, the characters ever so complex and relatable, the dialogues still deliciously witty and the sex scene was fan-fucking-tastic, the first true (non-rapey) sex scene in this story and oh boy is it worth it !
Please keep up the gone work and don't leave this masterpiece unfinished !
Can't wait wait to see how it'll end up for Kevin now that he has several good options (I really root for Helen though, as charming as Nadine may be).
5 stars without a second thought !
By far the best story I have read, ever. Whether on this site, this category, or anywhere else. The best
I literally can’t accurately express how amazing this story is, PLEASE keep writing
I'm getting the feeling that this could go 1 of three ways, either Nadine is going to continue seeing Kevin and sets him up with her sister and Nadine telling him she loves him, OR Helen decides she wants to take him and tells him she loves him, or Nadine and Helen both want him and I could see them ending with a threesome and Helen sharing with Nadine.
Really loved this one, keep up the good work, I come here almost daily to see if you updated, glad to see the story keeps going. Thanks dude
Honestly, this is probably the best series I've read on this site so far. Again I really like how the sex, while present, it isn't made the main thing. It doesn't dominate the story, it simply lends/adds to it. I love the development of the story as well as the main characters involved. At this point we all know how Diana is and I'm sure many don't like her, though when Nadine was first mentioned and then mentioned again in the last chapter, I thought she was going to be worse. Low and be hold, she's leagues better than Diana, even though she dabbles in sketchy business and appears to be plotting something. Kevin himself gets a good experience that even seems to help him grow a bit. Finally with Helen, and her relationship with Kevin. While many of us probably guessed at the date going bad, I personally didn't expect it to go exactly the way that it did, which makes it hit much closer to home for Helen and once again shows us a more vulnerable and soft side that later sparks the development between her and Kevin. Hell I even liked the little bit where she tells that mother off in the bath and spoke to her daughter. This was much more than I intended to say, but all in all, it just amounts to you doing really well with this series, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
I am amazed by this story and the characters are real to me. Helen is an amazing woman and I hope Dennis gets hit by a bus. That how you know you're immersed in a story, when the characters are so real you feel that pain. Or the happiness Kevin had with Nadine. Or even the brief introduction to Nadines sister and now I wanna now she's ok. I think your story is playing into my nature to want to help people but this is bar none one of the best stories I've read. Thank you so much for it and please keep it up. Excited for the next chapter and the excitement I get when it shows up in my feed. Thank you so much for sharing this.
i have loved this story from the start. what i wasn't expecting however was way it has touched and resonated with me deeply , i'm trans and still working my way through my own shit so i shouldn't be suprised . oh please can you continue this please !! . damn i wish i could write like this. thank you so much xoxo. hugs.
This is the first, and probably only, time I have given an erotica story 5stars and and did not once spank the monkey before I finished reading it. This story just keeps getting better and better! All futa = supersized amazons is not my thing, but you keep writting like this, and I may have to adjust my world view! Bravo sir, bravo!
Love the story and I definitely want to see more focus on Nadine and Bridgette. Perhaps we can get a spin-off? Just be sure to show off their darker sides. Poor Helen needs some love and I loathe Diane and I hope she ODs. Keep up the good work and I eagerly await the next chapter.
Not just the sex scenes in your stories are great, but also the story and world overall. Great interesting characters, amazing dialogue, and the feeling of wanting more after every chapter. You truly are a gifted writer and am very happy I found your story, you have a huge fan in me!
I can never bother with over 3 pages. You're a definite exception. I was really looking forward to Helen taking Kevin already. I guess we have to wait yet another chapter you goddamn tease :D
Keep it up.
I really love this stories and read them the second they published. But i thought that dianna loved kevin in her own way and he was the only one for her. I didnt like that they cheated on each other in this chapter. I would like dianna to find out he was chaeting on her, she is hot when she is angry and loving.
I like nadine. I like her sister as well, But I am really hoping for a happy ever after with helen.
I also really want Di to get a wake up call. Something needs to happen to teach her to value her sister.
The whole time I thought Nadine was playing him. It turns out she was, but not in the way I thought.
Loved the chapter. Would love to see more of Nadine and the feminization that she's into.
This story just keeps getting more amazing, Thanks for all your time and imagination, keep up the great work!!!!