All Comments on 'First Detention'

Really enjoyed the detail thanks for writing this. great job

I found the transition from the character being a goodie two shoes, to suddenly propositioning the teacher VERY unbelievable.

There is more crime to this story than belief and if the writer wanted his story to be honest, then he had much, way to much, easy sex with this job. Plus how did the two classmates and friends of the main character end up as the only two others to have sex with the teacher. He said this was his first time and then the other two girls came out. Gave it a 3 but thought of rating it a 2 as with so many people speaking about sex with the teacher, the school administration would have been knowledgeable of the sexual activity and someone would have gone to the lockup.

The story is fantasy fiction, not reality TV and as such does not have to be ruled by the mores and conventions of normal life within society. It's one person's daydream, not a documentary.

enjoyed your story but the sex seemed to happen with more words than action to bring the virgin excitement and build up to the desire to be taken. You wrote a nice story and your descriptions were exceptional without the normal wording one finds on this site.