All Comments on 'First Time Fatherly Fantasy (18+)'
by FuntimeFem
- 15 Comments
Really fucking naughty, fucking! Nice. Even loved it. Never was into fucking my daughter, but this guy nailing his daughter...under the conditions...is hot! Would be nice to know what they did during the night sleeping together and again the next morning when he needs to 'check out' her ankle again. Mmmm. I bet her pussy needs another checking out!
Hello FuntimeFem. I liked your story. It kept my interest to the end. I am excited to read the next chapter so please don't keep us waiting.
Thank you so much, I really appreciate the feedback ☺️😘 I'm glad to see my fantasy inspired and hope you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it ☺️❤️
Holy Hell!!
Can’t believe this is one of only two stories you’ve written.It was freakin’ HOT!
Especially during the end when both father and daughter succumb to their incestuous urges and dwell into that delicious fucking which btw, you excellently detailed with your words…..;)
For example….”vaginal walls clenching,pussy muscles hungrily chewing and slobbering” ohh god! 🤤
And then “My weary cunt squelches and burbles” dear god those types of specific details REALLY got me worked up.
And especially when all that love is from a father and daughter.
Mother/son and Older sister/younger brother are my other favorite pairings but there’s something special about a daddy’s girl that hits my spot & you Ms.Fem aroused more than my senses for more of this series & or stories.
A new fan.
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Aww I'm so happy y'all like my story 🥰😘 thank you ❤️ I love fantasizing and writing it. Was so arousing, and more arousing knowing you're all reading my innermost thoughts and enjoying them ♥️🥰😘 Thank you 💕❤️♥️🥰💕❤️♥️
"To be continued..."
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No chapter # in the title to warn this wasn't a complete story before opening it ALWAYS earns an automatic rating of 1.
I really wanted to fully enjoy this, but the 'first time' aspects don't really match up with the dialogue, which is way over the top for the scenario you suggest. Along with that, this magical 'separation' with mom isn't much of an excuse, for either of them frankly, to be betraying a marriage that still exists. If the scenario made more logical sense, and the dialogue didn't come out of some amateur gonzo porn video, it would have been far better. Keep it up, and next time, ignore the porn, and write a story with some plausibility along with the sex.
Loved your second submission! Very well done, did seem a bit rushed. I think you can flesh your next chapter out nicely!
Very enjoyable read. Nicely written with both the familial and sensual aspects respected and exploited.
It's nice to see someone having fun and still have some playfulness and gentleness pushing against the raunch. I came.
Dear Anonymous (above) , thank you for your feedback. As I've said in conversations and bio and story headers, I am not a professional writer. I have mentioned too that I lean toward cliche maybe because I'm happy to appeal to a broad audience. I'm honestly not so concerned with detail and reality or what makes logical or moral sense. I'm not a romance writer, that genre is trite to me. Yes I will continue the story/theme, though I'm not stating chapters because the story may or may not follow a chronological sequence. Each thing I post has a beginning and end in it's own right. I'm not writing a novel. I'm happy to titillate in the moment. Lots of people have messaged to say they enjoyed my story.and it served the purpose of temporary fun. I'm sure you'll find many other more talented writers that suit your requirements. I'm not here to please everyone, it's impossible to do so. Have fun hun 😊😘❤️