by mlady_france
and jerk off.
His cum will cover the keyboard and he will have to lick it off so that it doesn't stick the keys together.
Meanwhile his best friend will show up and find wifey in her aroused state and fuck her brains out.
They will fall in love and ride off into the sunset while STUPID is still trying to clean the keyboard.
my computer if I saw my wife having fun on the couch. I don't think there is a real man on the planet that would continue playing a game while their spouse was giving such a fine show 10' away. Evercrack, Doom and all the others will never replace sex as the best way to "relax."
An excellent first story, mlady! Good for you. I have to tell you I think she just needs to find a new man, instead of worrying about that one! :)
With out giving you more of a reason to dislike me, I enjoyed the story. The part where she admired herself in the mirror and felt herself in the shower were very cliche, but they worked well for your story. Keep writing.
like a woman scorned for Sega, as they say in Mallrats. I can totally identify with this story, as my boyfriend once pryed my mouth from his dick during the superbowl. You had some really good descriptions here, I can't wait to see more from you. Write me something about a frustrated housewife's vengence, I beg you! -S.
Very well written.
You have a good eye for description, the main character's physical and emotional traits were fully realised.
I do want to strangle that selfish prick though.
Well done Mlady, well done indeed. I like the way you describe her without bogging the story down. I look foreward to more of your work.
Nice writing mlady. It flowed well, I didn't feel like I was 'reading a story'. Hope to see more in the future.
Mlady,
Your story was very erotic and well written. Not only did you bring the reader into the story. You brought them into her broken heart. I would love to read a part two of this story. I have a feeling you could write a great twist the ending. Keep up the good work.
Darkknight
Hi mlady!
I loved your story! Feels so true to me as my b/f enjoy a lot passing time on the porn sites looking at videos and pics.
If he does not reject me, he sure does not get over me as before! Each and every morning before going to work, he have time for those sites but, at night, if I want him, I always have to work him. Before, I would just have to kiss him or snuggle with him and he would get aroused and throw me on the bed to make love with passion.
Did you get the idea of that story from your or some friends experiences? I feel many women have to struggle with that. It is so easy on the computer for men, no need to seduce, just take what they want.
Very good story indeed!
Didi
mlady ....
loved your story and thought it was sad for the poor young lady trying to pry her hubby off the computer ... I can totally relate to this i have the same problem at home but only in reverse id amlosmt give anything to give my wife the dicking she needs but she has no time only for the computer
this is my life but i have now learned how to please myself. Good job on describing it to the T!!!!