by Syzygy56
I enjoyed this tale quite a bit, I wonder if there will be a second part given the ending. Thanks for sharing your tale.
Excellent contribution! It certainly fits the Halloween genre very well. I like that the witch was only draining vitality from her victims without killing them outright. It makes better sense when people don't start totally disappearing. Changing her name and making a good excuse in the ending was cute too.
Creepy in just the right way. Definitely make you suspicions about taking candy from strangers.